Students are able to produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (bookpunch.com)
Okay, so del Toro still has a lot to learn about coherent writing, but the film is pretty good when it focuses on its real story — Elisa falling in love with the merman and hatching a plan to help him escape before he is killed. (ruthlessreviews.com)
CCRA.W.4: Produces clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (edutopia.org)