During the revision process prior to the publication of DSM - 5, the diagnosis of PTSD underwent many more changes than other mental disorder diagnoses affecting adults.
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During the revision process, Atwood says you may need to cut what you may feel is a fabulous piece of writing.
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during the revision process that you will add the flesh to its bones, the magic and the nuances that will make it come to life and keep your reader entranced.
During the revision process, I incorporated his recommendations on the media chapter and other parts of the report.