Sentences with phrase «awkward pacing issues»

Not exact matches

Despite being fairly meaty in size the expansion lacks any sort of meta - game reward or replayability, not to mention the awkward integration and occasional issue with pacing.

I've presented workshops and written several articles (here's a good one) on tips for approaching the whole editing and revising process, starting with macro issues like logistics, characterisation, plot, and pacing, and working your way through awkward phrasing and wordiness down to micro errors like spelling and punctuation.

One of the few possible issue with this is that the pacing of the main storyline can seem awkward at times.