Sentences with phrase «bad flow of the story»
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Worst of all, the story still makes no sense when Scott elects to resort to literal visual aids and flow charts to try and convey to us which characters are related and why.
https://fromthebalcony.com/
Which leads to some at best awkward things and at worst entire duplicated chapters, and chunks of text that really hamper story flow but no one dared object.