«Advanced» work «communicates insightfully with consistent awareness of audience and purpose; writing is confident, coherent, clearly focused, well - organized, and thoroughly developed; provides a variety of well -
chosen details, quotations, or examples to support claims; demonstrates exceptional control of sentence structure with
precise use of language and word choice; reflects mastery of the conventions of written English and is virtually free of errors.»
To pass this test, you need a concise document that delivers
precise information
chosen for impact, rather than an entire kitchen sink of
details.