Sentences with phrase «draft revisions for»

Below for your review are the first and second draft revisions for Version 4.0:

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The contextual education committee spent a full year drafting a proposal, which then underwent revisions for another full year in consultation with the faculty.

The draft that Hopewell left when he died was accompanied by notes for its final revision.

The country's apex food regulator has also issued a draft notification, inviting comments and suggestions from stakeholders for the revision of special provisions relating to the sale of vegetable oils and fats.

They have asked for comments from the public regarding their draft revision of the breastfeeding guidelines, which make no changes to the recommendation, «give infants no food or drink other than breastmilk unless medically indicated,» while providing patients no information on the risks of avoiding supplementation.

A petition has been drafted asking Health Canada to extend the deadline for the online consultation and to implement cross-country consultation meetings as they have done recently for revisions to Canada's Food Guide and Canada's Physical Activity Guideline.

Recommendations for use, 2004 Revision (DRAFT: 7 January 2004).

Any revisions to the special events code, town officials explained, will start from scratch and will be discussed at a code committee hearing, where the public can give input, and Town Board work sessions, then be approved for public hearing once a new draft is finalized.

In his resignation letter, Mr. Meguin chastised the town for an ethics code that was «poorly drafted and requires substantial revision in several areas, particularly dual employment, gifts and the disclosure of other potential conflicts of interest.»

The state Education Department plans to offer its first draft of new evaluations for teachers and principals next week amid growing discontent over another revision to the state system.

Featured in the exhibition is an original draft of George Washington's Farewell Address penned in his hand that was sent to Alexander Hamilton for comment and revision on May 15, 1796.

Williams, who is in his third and final term, said he has been drafting legislation for several years since testifying before the City Charter Revision Commission in 2010 and is planning to introduce the bill «very shortly» with the hopes of it passing in the next session.

Senator Cory Gardner (R — CO), a key player in drafting the bill, told ScienceInsider yesterday that he hopes the long - awaited COMPETES revision will be introduced before Congress recesses next month for the political conventions.

I should add, what Richard is asking for is mostly content that was lacking in the early draft that is now for sale, and that we have been adding into the final revision.

To the joy of my English teacher heart, going paperless allowed me to add extra rounds of drafting, peer review, and revision for students — essential parts of good writing process that can be difficult to include due to time constraints.

Students applauded the draft and offered affirmations and ideas for revision.

Do you allow for multiple drafts and revisions and demand high - quality products?

Model an iterative development process for students to help them see excellent final products as the result of feedback, revisions, and many drafts.

For students, revision is something that is at best a ponderous process when a first draft seems sufficient and at worst a process that seems like magic that they do not understand how to replicate.

Publishing is a great motivating tool for all students, but great value needs to be placed on the process of first drafts and revisions.

The AACTE Board of Directors this fall approved a revision of the AACTE Principles for National Accreditation in Educator Preparation, a document originally drafted in 2006 to state the Association's aspirational views regarding national accreditation.

Draft recommendations for technology - related revisions to the Guidelines for the Preparation of English Language Arts Teachers.

One of the 42 Common Core Standards for English Language Arts lets students know that revising their first draft is not necessary and that revision has nothing to do with promoting the writer's expanded and deeper thinking.

Encourage active parental participation in developing goals: they should be carefully drafted and vetted prior to an IEP with ample time at the meeting for review and revision.

High School Assistant Principals Eva Jones and John Moskov shared a series of draft revisions to the High School Code of Conduct for 2017 - 18.

Although President Barack Obama and Mr. Duncan have called for revision of the law by the start of the next school year, draft legislation has yet to be introduced, and school leaders anxious about rapidly approaching deadlines are clamoring for leeway in the meantime.

I try to put out a call for beta readers after every major revision to a draft.

To improve your writing skill through thesis writing, finish the initial draft of the thesis early and send the copy to your instructor or your supervisor for a thorough revision.

The document continues to evolve through many revisions (between 100 and 150 drafts) back and forth between us until we finally converge on a final draft for our editor.

Once I finish working on new posts, I turn to my next project — the rough draft of my next book is in its beta revision stage and won't be out for several more months, but I started promoting that book in 2010 through the platform Blog I launched just for that book.

When the first draft of your book cover is complete, I would be expecting for your thoughts so I can work with all the revisions.

Engagement: From the day you contract us to the final 10 - day period for final draft revisions, your professional will be in communication with you.

Next I looked at my goals, made arbitrary decisions as to anticipated page counts (Young Adult = 180 pages, Single Title = 375 pages... your mileage may vary) and tried to anticipate how much time would be required for revision and polishing drafts.

«Caitlin's incredibly thorough feedback, which included comments in the manuscript as well as a two - page letter on the overarching revisions called for by the piece, comprehensively addressed my novel and the potential in this current draft.

If you divide your time on several parts, including preparation (gathering and collecting information, analyzing of data and topic choosing etc.), outline making, draft writing, revision and editing; and pay special attention to these stages during day or more - you will have more chances to get a good grade than a person, who has spent only two hours or one night for essay writing.

With every first draft I write, I find I fall into the lazy habit of telling, and with each revision, I look for places I can show more.

We provide our clients with numerous drafts for them to make necessary revisions before they buy the papers.

And when you get that final draft, we urge to review it carefully and ask your writer for any revisions you want, at no cost, before you take final delivery.

This is still only a first draft and I'll need to do the proper beta reads and revisions on it, but it's progress and I know my loyal fans have been patiently waiting for this next installment so it might help them wait a little longer for the last life of the book to be written.

He also authored first drafts of ordinance revisions making TNR legal for the first time within Indianapolis.

The World Health Organisation has drafted definitions for video game addiction as part of its beta of International Compendium of Diseases revision.

But of all the fresh considerations of Carson's work, there's one that stands out for me at the moment — a recent paper by two researchers of rhetoric and writing who dug in on «Silent Spring» drafts, notes and revisions and found that Carson had a remarkable and rare trait for someone so committed to raising public concern about a pressing environmental issue.

Lead Chapter Authors and Contributing Authors will work to address Reviewer comments and make necessary revisions for the secondary draft.

Revisions and Updates to Staff Draft Forms and Instructions for Submitting Electric Transmission - related Data for the 2009 Integrated Energy Policy Report

A work plan was drafted for revision of Activity Data and Emission Factors, and construction of national FRL The country also benefited from targeted support to strengthening capacity for development of the FREL and facilitating dialogue and exchange of information between Cambodia, Indonesia, Malaysia, Nepal and Viet Nam on FREL / FRL development.

Summary of Revisions and Updates to Draft Electricity Resource Plans Forms and Instructions for the 2009 Integrated Energy Policy Report.

Once the Patent Act revisions are in force, draft regulations are expected to be published for consultation and subsequently put into force in 2017/2018.

Select, draft, complete or revise, or assist in the selection, drafting, completion or revision of, a document for use in a proceeding.

Draft revision prepared for discussion Meredith «No Half Measures Conference» 2013, also presented at Joint OFL / ONIWG Conference, June 2, 2015.

2013 draft revision (prepared for the Meredith Conference) of the blueprint collaboratively created by the injured worker and labour community and endorsed in 2004 by the Ontario Network of Injured Workers Groups and the Ontario Federation of Labour.