Not exact matches
The authors would like to thank Hartwig Siebner for his valuable advice
concerning the fMRI design, Wolfgang Miltner for his valuable comments on an earlier draft of the
manuscript, Anne Ohrt, Joachim Laudien and Johann Kuhtz - Buschbeck for their help during sweat collection, Bernfried Sojka for his help in constructing the olfactometer, Jan Born for the analysis of the endocrine parameters, and Rachael Cole and Sabine Schlösser for their help in language
editing.
If you're
concerned about the big picture, a developmental
edit will help you restructure and reorganize, trimming down the areas that distract from the
manuscript's major themes and plotlines while tightening up your pace and making your dialogue feel more natural.
In addition to assessing a
manuscript's structure, developmental
editing helps you form a vision for your
manuscript concerning voice and style.