«Look, we have to tell the story and the story has to be built around
the emotional arcs of characters,» he told the audience at Wizard World Cleveland.
At times, the film feels to be a straight drama, exploring
the emotional arcs of Assaf and Tamar on their respective journeys.
Although trimming a source material's story for time constraints is an understandable and widely accepted practice in filmmaking, cutting the already trim depths of
emotional arcs of Ana and Christian that were presented in the final novel for its movie made the overall adaptation untitallating and unfulfilling.
Autistic children blinked right through those moments, suggesting they were not following
the emotional arc of the story, but they responded sharply when an object suddenly moved.
For, although this flick focuses on a different set of survivors as they adjusted to the U.S.,
the emotional arc of their experience is unsettlingly similar.
«But it is in
the emotional arc of the character where Day's work really shines.
One sitting, 90 minutes to two - and - a-half hours of what
the emotional arc of it needs to be and the events that need to happen.
Salaam Reads titles happen to have Muslim protagonists, but as with any book, the appeal is in
the emotional arc of the characters.
Not exact matches
In his B + review for the AV Club, A.A. Dowd writes, «Zhao holds it together through the sheer range
of her performance, reverse - engineering an
emotional continuity — an
arc, even — that connects characters and past work she's delivered for Jia.
When she looks at herself in the bathroom mirror after she's tried out cheating on her own beloved, a complete
emotional arc is displayed on her face in just a few flickering facial expressions: shock, then disappointment, and finally, a flash
of pure giddiness.
All that being said, while it never reaches the
emotional arc it should (or at least the level it thinks it accomplishes) concerning the ramifications family men and women have with a whole week off
of marriage, they do an adequate job making us at least care about the journey.
Fortunately, the movie still makes time for serious
emotional drama and resonant
arcs for all three
of its main characters, Scott Lang / Ant - Man (Paul Rudd), his mentor Hank Pym (Michael Douglas), and Hank's daughter Hope (Evangeline Lilly).
If viewers don't feel connected to a character because
of a lack
of development, it's difficult to have a response to
emotional beats in their story
arc.
But where Superbad improves upon the recipe
of those relatively - superficial offerings is in the attention it devotes to character development which, in turn, allows for the cultivation
of an
emotional arc, some warm and fuzzy moments mixed in with the mirth, and ultimately a satisfying denouement.
Like Jolie, the writers also do a good job
of compartmentalizing each piece
of the story so that it feels like a fresh chapter with renewed interest, while also keeping the focus on the
emotional / spiritual
arc of Louis as a consistent throughline, so that the movie's climax (which is much more metaphoric and spiritual than literal) has significant impact and satisfies in an iconic and moving way that is hard for any film to pull off.
Unlike the first movie's largely helpless Sally Hardesty, Renee Zellweger's Jenny is a heroine updated for the post-Aliens era, given an
emotional arc and a well
of untapped inner strength.
Its uplifting story
arc may be formulaic but the strength and honesty
of the performances give it surprising
emotional heft — especially from Damon as a troubled math genius in the role that marked his arrival as a major, serious actor.
The underused Skurge waddles in his
arc of a guilt - stricken traitor, who gains agency too late, but the
emotional impact needs a lot more than brief shots over faces
of desperate, helpless Asgardians.
Usually in a romantic comedy like this, it's up to the leads to have the
emotional arc and all
of the supporting actors to bring the laughs.
There isn't much
of an
emotional arc to the story — we don't care enough about any
of these people, ever after learning so much about them, to care who wins.
La La Land steals liberally from Demy's catalogue, both in terms
of their visual cues and the characters»
emotional arcs.
Bergman's screenplay charts the
arc of self - inflicted destruction — the forward march into inevitability — but it's Ullman who finds the nuance, the gestures and micro-sparks
of emotional connection and withdrawal that lead inexorably to tragedy.
While none
of these
emotional beats are necessarily groundbreaking — you'd see them in any relationship movie — they are deeply felt, and the
arc over which they unfold in the movie is feels effortlessly orchestral in its composition.
It's just not the same build - up, the situations aren't as dire, and whatever
emotional content we might bestow upon the story
arcs of Thorin and Bilbo feel like chicken - feed compared to those who've been injected into the piece to supposedly give some resonance.
Character's
emotional arcs are all too brief, submerged beneath all those entrails, and as usual, the protagonists demonstrate stupidity in the face
of danger.
The story doesn't make much sense, and doesn't really create any kind
of dramatic
arc or
emotional punch.
However, it shares with those films many
of the director's creative trademarks including fantastical elements, rich characters,
emotional complexity, and an atypical narrative
arc.
HBO's set includes a horde
of extras that delve into George R.R. Martin's world, though some
of the best extras may be the wonderfully unpretentious commentary tracks, each featuring a different line - up but all linked by a sense
of glee at what their characters get up to even as the show follows complex political and
emotional arcs.
There are defined
emotional arcs, decently charming characters and a good amount
of irreverent laughs stuffed into the margins and by the end, you find yourself not only rooting for Tree's survival but her redemption and happiness.
But if «Wilson» can pack an
emotional punch, and Harrelson carries his character through some form
of metamorphic
arc, anything is possible.
This gives Deadpool 2 a case
of tonal whiplash where you're laughing hysterically at the devil - may - care jokes only to have to pump the brakes and care about Deadpool's
emotional arc.
This time they are part
of a larger
emotional arc for the film and character.
The
emotional weight
of such an
arc is compelling and devastating.
Rockwell — in his best performance to date — has the biggest
emotional arc, changing his ways in the course
of a story that appeared at its peak the minute it started.
Anderson's films have long had an off - kilter balance between
arcs and individual moments, and this movie is largely tilted towards the latter: to name just one
of the most piercing examples, the first flashback (
of many), which shows Spots and Atari's first meeting, has enough
emotional heft to sustain a full half
of a lesser film.
Because there's so little time with them together as a couple, I needed to have some bedrock that's incredibly strong and could support the love story side
of the movie, and support Rooney's
emotional arc, and also that would in a way define for the audience the way in which the movie was going to function.
What it gets right on paper is immediately apparent: Casting hot - ticket stars against type as crestfallen romantics struggling to cope with mental illness provides two attractive but ostensibly vacuous mainstream celebrities (Bradley Cooper and Jennifer Lawrence) the enviable opportunity to prove their worth with conspicuously «revelatory» performances; meanwhile, the fundamental seriousness
of their characters» respective
arcs, with Cooper hoping to control the outbursts caused by his bipolar disorder and Lawrence attempting to overcome her grief over her husband's recent death, raise the
emotional stakes considerably, elevating largely light material from rote comedy to overtly «adult» drama.
None
of it resonates however, lacking a gripping
emotional arc.
It is a surprisingly touching movie with the same kind
of emotional arc as «Awakenings»; the character is in a trance
of deprivation and poverty, neglect and drugs, until she is awakened by her violent act and its unexpected results.
T'Challa has no
arc — he's just kinda there, while all three
of the male villains, and several
of the female characters, have much more
of an
emotional presence.
Because
of that structure, critique groups are often better with writing craft issues on a smaller scale (clarifying sentences or paragraphs, scene goals, immediate motivations, dialogue passages, etc.) than on a story - sized scale (character development, plot flow, story goals and motivations, themes,
emotional arcs, etc.).
A piece
of advice that I heard back in the day with regards to writing pitch letters to agents, I think also applies here: Write as if a Spanish soccer announcer was describing your character's
emotional arc.
Successful writers I know — whether they're published commercially or self - published — need to write and rewrite their books many times, usually with the support
of a developmental editor, not someone who does spelling and punctuation but a creative partner who is able to identify and solve problems with the story, structure, characterization, dialogue, visual description, literary style, pacing, the narrative
arc — with a first, second, and third act that engages the reader and reaches some kind
of epiphany or denouement that entertains, illuminates and provides
emotional satisfaction for the reader.
I believe this initial assessment
of the whole book, rather than reading only a chapter or two, is the best way to see how the author sustains the narrative
arc — creates the premise, develops the action, resolves the problem — and brings the reader to some kind
of satisfying personal experience, an
emotional landing place, whether it's inspiring, happy, tragic or just plain informative.
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ARC's network
of placement partners will be continuing the physical and
emotional rehabilitation
of the animals and ultimately matching them with families looking to adopt.
«The neglectful conditions were typical
of hoarding, which is a compulsive
emotional attachment to things or animals that often leads to a situation like this that causes immense suffering for both the animals and people involved,» said
ARC President Scotlund Haisley.
For those
of us who are animal lovers, spay / neuter programs like those offered by
ARC ease the
EMOTIONAL COST that comes with the knowledge that thousands
of animals are killed each day due to overcrowding.
It's grand scale war and hallmark boots - on - the - ground Call
of Duty action with memorable characters, rich
emotional arcs, and stunning new environments, all within an epic new setting.
This crybaby
of a character ends up becoming the heart
of the party, not only because he's openly
emotional, but because he actually grows, maturing over his game - long character
arc.