I think that model release is a terrible
example of legalese, full of needless repetition and archaic language.
Not exact matches
We included
examples of «
legalese» from real life insurance policies, but this doesn't mean that this is how the rider will be defined on your policy.
So, for
example, even if a superior repeatedly points out to the person that he should ditch the here - and - there words and other forms
of legalese (as The Lawyerist's Andy Mergendahl has advised here), or that nominalizations and buried verbs should be reworked into active voice, or that Enclosed please find (PDF) is silly and should be stricken from all correspondence, a month or two later the superior will see these legal - writing foibles in a letter, memorandum, or, worse, a brief filed with a court.
Now, publisher Henry Holt and Co. is about to release his book, The Party
of the First Part: The Curious World
of Legalese, in which, according to Publishers Weekly, he «offers a cornucopia
of hilarious, offbeat and downright bizarre
examples of simple concepts contorted into words that defy understanding.»
The Canadian Income Tax Act, for
example, is over 2600 pages
of complex small print
legalese.
For
example, Kenneth Chestek found that judges, law clerks, and practicing lawyers rated sample briefs with strong narrative components as more persuasive than sample briefs without strong narrative components.13 Sean Flammer found that judges rated sample briefs as more persuasive when they were written in plain language rather than in
legalese.14 Similarly, Robert Benson and Joan Kessler found that appellate judges and their law clerks preferred briefs written in plain language rather than in
legalese.15 Finally, Joseph Kimble and Steve Harrington found that judges and attorneys preferred plain language over
legalese.16 These studies, however, measure only the judges» and lawyers» stated preferences for particular styles
of writing.