I am a massive advocate of learning through play,
excellent suggestions above.
Not exact matches
Susanne went
above and beyond, making important plot
suggestions and pointing out holes in the story, along with providing an
excellent job of line editing and proofreading.
Just a
suggestion here in preparation for the droves of people who will try and lambast this
excellent work, you might want to change the legend colors for the comparison chart
above — maybe use Green instead of blue for the lower temperatures?
I think your
suggestions above are
excellent.