I agree wholeheartedly with the opinions
expressed in your first paragraph.
I think the idea you've
expressed in the first paragraph is utopian in the extreme, and is more likely to invite in «Dick the Butcher» and «Jack Cade» than «Hercules» and «Solomon».
Not exact matches
But note that
in spite of all of that much - needed extantly essential, presidential, and existential verbiage, for the
first time
in the long history of «the problem,» we have a law society committee that
expresses the right attitude (would you believe, «sincere fear,» at pages 4 - 5 of the Report itself, being pages 235 - 236 of the Report to Convocation, January 23, 2014),
in paragraphs 6 and 9:
Its
first paragraph states: «The Treasurer of the Law Society of Upper Canada, Gavin MacKenzie, today
expressed the Law Society's continuing concern over the need for a well - funded and sustainable system of legal aid
in Ontario.»
I sometimes use as an example, it's two
paragraphs that open a memorandum, and it's the real thing, I pull these
in and we edit these two
paragraphs and we see how much better they could be, but one day I was teaching to a group and there was a partner and
in fact there were several partners, but one of the partners raised his hand and he said, you know, this reads like a
first - year associate who is unsure of herself, and I was agreeing that I hadn't seen that earlier and
expressed it that way because when put all this stuff into our writing, the vis - à - vis type phrases and a lot of overblown ways of
expressing ourselves, all we are doing is showing that we are insecure that we really don't believe
in what we're saying.
On the
first paragraph,
express your intention to apply for a position
in the company.
First Paragraph Express your interest
in the administrative assistant's job opening at a specific company.