Sentences with phrase «find plot holes»

They find the plot holes, timeline issues, things that need to be worded differently, boring areas, etc. (The key is, of course, finding people who are good at this.

This might help us find plot holes, unnecessary scenes, or dropped plot threads.

A good editor has to be able to find plot holes and sluggish chapters as well as misspellings and bad grammar.

She may also find plot holes and point out bigger issues.

Not exact matches

To pin down the nature of their dozen candidates, Hailey's team plotted their spectral peaks and tracked their activity across time, finding patterns consistent with previous observations of binary black hole emissions elsewhere in the galaxy.

To find out which process wins out, ecologist Jerry Melillo of the Marine Biological Laboratory in Woods Hole, Massachusetts, tracked two 10,000 - square - foot plots of deciduous forest for seven years.

For example, you find out that Butler's character was some kind of operative agent, but this seems to be putty in a plot hole to explain why he is so good at what he is doing.

There are plot holes such as you'd find in most imaginative tales; for example, in the Indian hotel, why would Ian walk up the stairs and take the elevator down?

Solidly told by German writer - director Fatih Akin («Head - On», «The Cut»), it displays decent if unexceptional TV - movie chops until a pile - up of plot holes and wild story twists take it somewhere so crude that you'd be forgiven for finding it offensive.

As with any such thriller that involves the thorough confusion of the audience, plot holes could be found if we looked hard enough.

There may be a few plot holes here and there, sure, but the cast is strong enough that you find yourself forgiving any narrative stumbles.

But the plot is riddled with holes - do a quick google search and you'll find lists and lists of them - and there's very little sense of who the new baddies are and exactly what they're trying to achieve.

However, soon the plot holesstart opening, and we find that the movie has more plot holes than actual plot.

The road - trip plot is simple, but there are befuddling plot holes — like when Wendy is hospitalized after a car accident, but we never find out what happened to the others in the car — and the dialogue is often cringe - worthy.

Look for plot holes with any kind of critical eye and you will find many.

The film works — and just barely — only because the narrative flies at warp speed; there's no time to think about gaping holes in the plot and gross violations of the fundamental laws of physics, not to mention credibility, when you finish hurtling in the course of two hours across the Atlantic Ocean and back only to find yourself hurtling through the Chunnel with no chance to catch your breath.

The busy minds at How It Should Have Ended found some of the plot holes in Black Panther and applied real - world logic to them.

If one needs further proof, the Commander in Chief on the receiving end of that question is the third man to hold the title over the course of the plot, and the actual head of Presidential security is busy at the time, given that he's holed up in the Oval Office coordinating a group of mercenaries in the White House to find the actual President in order to hold him for ransom — namely the hundreds of millions of dollars in the Federal Reserve.

I found it best not to overthink the story line, as I began to envision a number of plot holes, but because the film is so involving, the viewer isn't given the opportunity to second guess any of the elements involved here.

One company has a new app, available soon in beta, that provides authors with a «big picture» of their manuscript before they send it off for editing, helping them find some of the possible plot holes and character flaws in order to streamline the process down the road.

Get at least one opinion, but preferably a lot more to find out if the story actually «works» and if there are any holes in the plot.

It is checking the story for logic holes, inconsistencies of plot and character, patching any holes in the fourth wall, finding spots in the story that are weak or don't make sense, then suggesting possible solutions.

They also could not find holes in the plot or point out where a character was weak or the dialogue needed to be redone.

The reason for this is that the beta readers may find major holes in the plot prompting you to have to do a major rewrite and saving you unnecessary expenses down the track.

A shrewd and exacting reader may find «holes» in the plot — for example, the facility with which everyone seems to open up, or the level of access a lady's maid seems to have to everyone and everything she seeks — but for those willing to suspend disbelief, this is a great way to spend a few hours and maybe even learn something about the New York of a different time.

You may be surprised at how many plot holes they find that you thought you'd plugged.

A good editor will find holes in the plot that the beta reader may have missed, things that need further explaining.

There were certain holes where you have to learn that the ball trajectory shown when plotting your shot can be flat out wrong, then find an alternative way to the hole.

Admittedly there's a few plot holes to be found along the way, but overall Deponia tells a tale that is hugely satisfying from start to finish, and that largely comes down to two things: its characters and its sense of humour.

Many of us will just laugh it off and move on paying no attention to the plot, but some of us channel our inner detective and need to find out if this is truly a plot hole.

F is about the failures of the heart muscle while in A, for «aperture», a woman, Anna, finds a picnic table and — in a plot worthy of Henry James's psychological fiction — discovers her name graffitied into it; she digs into the letters, creating a hole with a creepy revelation.