Sentences with phrase «flaws in the character development»

A good editor will spot weaknesses in your story line, flaws in your character development, all those things the writer won't see, being too close to the subject, or sometimes too inexperienced.

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That reliance is less engaging in the movie's interpersonal relationships, which, despite charming performances from Jackman (who manages to overcome his character's numerous flaws) and Goyo (who avoids the trap of becoming a grating «precocious kid»), are as rote as their development is inevitable.

The other major flaw is that so much time was spent in this movie on it's stylistic looks which as i said earlier were flawless but so much time and effort was spent on these that it seems to have taken away from the character development side of the film.

Stronger in theory than in execution, Garrity's Borealis boasts a dense script and meaningful direction which is somewhat undermined by flawed character motivation, contrived plot developments, and a slogging comedy - crime arc.

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