Sentences with phrase «in earlier drafts»

The legislation fails to include optional coverage of nurse home visitation services through Medicaid — a provision included in earlier drafts of the bill.

A 13 - page final version was released publicly that month but without many of the details included in earlier drafts, which were several times longer, say people familiar with the investigation.

The Tenant and the Tenant's real estate agent do not recall this clause in the earlier drafts of the lease agreement.

In earlier drafts, it read «We the people of the states of...» -LRB-

In the earlier drafts of the SPM, there was a key message that was new, snappy and relevant: Many of the more worrying impacts of climate change really are symptoms of mismanagement and underdevelopment.

For example, in the earlier drafts of my story, I didn't have many clues about the villains in my story, and the reader didn't feel their presence as a result.

The definition of «scientifically based research standards» for education wound up less proscriptive than in earlier drafts, but still limited causal claims to research designs that could bear their weight.

When prodded as to whether African American characters were given a fairer shake in earlier drafts of his screenplay, McDonagh does note that there were other scenes with actress Amanda Warren that didn't make the finished cut.

Well, Mark Ruffalo has since revealed that the green Goliath was indeed in earlier drafts of the film but was taken out to add to the suspense on where he is after the events of Age of Ultron:

Characters who may have had real narrative arcs in earlier drafts of the script are now paper thin and superfluous.

We ran part of this interview regarding the original journey K - 2SO had in earlier drafts of Rogue One, but this is the full Alan Tudyk interview with insight from Hal Hickel along with it.

But the totals, smaller than in earlier drafts of the legislation, are still consistent with the Administration's pledge to double their budgets in a decade.

The IPCC has backed off from some of the predictions in its last report, in 2007, and in earlier drafts.

Some of the material in this book has, in earlier drafts, been delivered as lectures to a variety of public audiences.

The findings of the report differ from those presented in an earlier draft, seen by Reuters in July, which had concluded that the growth of renewable power had not harmed the reliability of the grid and that significant increases in renewable power generation remained possible.

Congress followed suit, cutting subsidies for electric cars, wind farms, and solar panels in early drafts of the recent tax bill.

But (I said in this earlier draft) it is an utterly time - bound notice, and its value in the text is, for us, sharply negative.

In an earlier draft of this, I saved the revelation that this was the first game of a doubleheader for the end, a Shyamalanian twist to make you realize how everything was exponentially worse than it already was.

In an early draft of my piece (still on my hard drive, not submitted to the paper), I'd addressed the fact that here in America, we believe strongly in offering choice and accommodating diversity.

Amidst a worldwide furor over proposed legislation that, in its early drafts, earned the moniker «Kill the Gays» bill, Cabrera himself turned up in Uganda, praising its leaders as «the righteous.»

The 2010 redistricting retained the setup of two representatives per senate district, but some of the districts were considered too large and too sprawling in early drafts.

The later, administration - vetted version also includes a line that wasn't in the earlier draft, saying that methane pollution risks in fracking are mitigated by well - designed gas wells: «This risk can be reduced if the casing and cementing of wells is properly designed and constructed,»» the news report says.

«To keep my wife and sanity, I'm now done with electoral politics and free to be candid about politicians of all persuasions — and myself,» he wrote in an early draft of the book, published by St. Martin's Press and sent to The Post.

As we reported last month, quite a few Lower East Side residents objected to language in a early draft of Community Board 3's guidelines, stating: «The Essex Street Market should be relocated to a superior site on a major street to accommodate a larger market with more goods and services.»

There was a line in an early draft, and I think he decided that the substance of that was important, not getting into a discussion about William Hague's hairstyle or his drinking habits.»

For example, in early drafts, the data were so unexplainably weird that they became «interesting» — perhaps suggesting the glimmer of a scientific breakthrough.

They both appeared in early drafts of the agreement but mysteriously disappeared in the final hours.

I should add, what Richard is asking for is mostly content that was lacking in the early draft that is now for sale, and that we have been adding into the final revision.

The ingenious setup may once have worked in an early draft of the screenplay: four buddies head to Vegas for a bachelor party.

In an early draft, Deadpool supposedly couldn't figure out his costume, so he found Spider - Man's cowl lying around on the street, turned it inside out, and that was his costume for the movie.

When his sadistic older brother Billy (Tom Burke) beats a young prostitute to death, the woman's father is granted vengeance by the local police chief (Vithaya Pansringarm), an all - powerful, near spiritual presence; in an earlier draft he was known as the Angel of Vengeance.

And you're absolutely right, he was in the earliest drafts of the [Guardians of the Galaxy].»

Marvel Studios» president Kevin Feige said that while the Wasp was in early drafts of Captain America: Civil War, they were removed to give Hope Van Dyne's debut as the Wasp more time and prominence.

Although his character appeared in an early draft of the film, the actor says scheduling conflicts prevent him from returning for the sequel.

Also different in the earlier draft: as Lena and Kane embrace, a meteor shower appears in the background, with one of the meteors breaking open to reveal more Shimmer is on the way to Earth.

In an interview with SlashFilm, Marvel Studios President Kevin Feige revealed that Hope Van Dyne was included in early drafts of «Civil War» in her Wasp identity, which she receives in the mid-credits scene of «Ant - Man.»

In early drafts Rose was «a little bit closer to John Cassavetes's character in Rosemary's Baby: The audience is kind of let in to the fact that [he's] up to no good in subtle ways from the very beginning.»

The name Starkiller was the original last name for Luke Skywalker in early drafts of the first Star Wars script.

With a few exceptions, the 13 recommendations in the final report of the 21 - member Congressional panel are not significantly different from those included in an earlier draft.

In early drafts, I wrote that I was in deep psychological trouble, but the query was more expressive (and more accurate) when I described a «turbulent personal, political and psychological adventure.»

And trust me, a lot of what you've written in the early drafts will suck.

Here's a few grammar mistakes that get made often, particularly in early drafts, and are important to keep an eye out for while reviewing your drafts:

Missing commas are much clearer, and are another little bit of formatting easy to miss in an early draft.

(I've pubbed a few stories, book reviews, etc and have been contacted by an agent but I'm in the early draft of my first novel.)

I read them in early draft form, so it's fun to revisit them now after they have evolved into final form.

They tend to have a less secure grip on the structure of their work and are more likely to need assistance in the early drafts.

Music is essential for me when I'm in the early drafting stages.

Better to learn about it in the early drafting stages and work at it during that process than after an editorial gut - punch of epic proportions.

But in an earlier draft, Kafka tells a different story.

«Net - zero» language has now appeared as an optional paragraph in early drafting text for the anticipated global climate deal currently under negotiation.