Not exact matches
The
language includes mild profanities and terms of Deity, as well as two
unnecessary uses of a sexual expletive (according to MPAA information, a PG - 13 movie can only contain one use of this term).
It's encouraging to see that some
language in a longer draft declaration that might have created
unnecessary divisions (see my previous post) is not in the statement that emerged after a final round of vetting by participants,
including the Vatican and the office of U.N. Secretary - General Ban Ki - moon.
Excessive Length: If your resume is over one page long, you should take the time to evaluate whether you have
included unnecessary information or redundant
language.
Things that a cover letter shouldn't ever denote
include presumptuousness, excessively formulaic, rambling, aggressiveness, wimpy
language and
unnecessary embellishments.