But things that will make me stop include
a large romantic element in a thriller, because if I purchased a thriller, I'm expecting one, not a romance; too much misspelled dialect because it makes the story really hard to follow; too much profanity because it often signals a taste level in the story that I'm not going to like (honestly, I shouldn't read 5 pages and have more profanity than pages).
A subplot involving a Cinderella-esque
romantic relationship between the Bergen King and a peasant girl takes up a
large chunk of time and is, by far, the wackiest and silliest
element.