Sentences with phrase «like plot holes»

Small elements like plot holes, handling on ladders, and the occasional glitch happen, but are infrequent and diminutive enough to nearly overlook.

A developmental edit focuses on things like plot holes, character and plot development issues, timing, inconsistencies and problems with dialogue.

A developmental editor, who looks at your manuscript as a whole for big problems like plot holes or poor narrative flow, may suggest massive changes.

Not exact matches

While I have problems with some of the plot holes, the book did an excellent job of making the reader understand what it was like to live during that racially charged time period.

I liked that Rey was a nobody, but this is a plot hole to me because it doesn't explain how she was so easily able to do all of this stuff the Skywalkers can do.

A dull and painful mess that seems like a clumsy mix of The Transporter, Angel Heart and Kill Bill, forcing us to put up with an unbelievably stupid protagonist amidst embarrassing clichés, a lot of godawful dialogue, absurd plot holes and a ridiculous ending.

With it's dark humour, violent action scenes, great acting and interesting story, Kill Me Three Times is an original movie that deserves to be well known.Sure, the movie is not perfect and has it's flaws like the fact that the scenario is not all that clever, there was some annoying plot holes and overall the movie is silly but it's still a great entertaining movie.

Their unusual - looking relationship was never explained, but in a cartoon filled with anthropomorphic animals skilled in death - defying martial arts that hardly seemed like the biggest plot hole.

The plot is filled with holes and seems like he had great ideas that didn't really link so he just put bits and pieces together to try and make it flow but it was truly just all over the place and unequivocally bland.

Speaking of gripes and plot holes, like the shark in Jaws, Batman himself is the biggest plot hole of the entire series.

Holes are uncovered in the plot which make you question sequences and the ending is abrupt and kinda rushed, its mainly a vehicle for Goss much like «The Transporter» was a vehicle for Statham but this is abit too late and dated really, still its kinda cool to see a trio of cockneys in the main roles of a US film.

Once a compelling and exciting director who merged twisty plotting and interesting characters with really dynamic and effective work behind the camera, the filmmaker had drunk his Kool - Aid to such an extent that he became a self - parody and it looked like there was no way he could crawl back out of the hole that he had dug himself.

Liked the first one better myself, but yep - what is it with plot holes these days?!

Between parallel dimensions and random teleportation, there are a few moments of genuine surprises, like the missing gyroscope and earthworms, but they entail ridiculous plot holes about how human anatomy works.

Wheeler likes to point out plot holes and liberties taken, while Hallström mainly agrees and defends the inaccuracies.

The minuses include the unethical means Vincent uses to accomplish his good deeds (like lying, stealing, betting and drug selling), and some glaring plot holes, especially when Vincent's drowning financial problems inexplicably dry up.

- Plot holes like how Bruce Wayne recovers in the Pit with an Iron Man style situation.

Like its brain - damaged protagonist, Criminal just shouts and shoots its way into, not out of, an oblivion of illogic, plot holes and emotionally unengaging scenery - chewing.

The road - trip plot is simple, but there are befuddling plot holes — like when Wendy is hospitalized after a car accident, but we never find out what happened to the others in the car — and the dialogue is often cringe - worthy.

Often dubbed — not without cause — the best superhero film yet, this is so brimming with great characters — oh, and Maggie Gyllenhaal's boring Rachel Dawes — that you can almost overlook the plot holes (like why exactly does Gordon fake his own death?).

Consistently strong acting hides potential plot holes like that and sells instances with the potential to invite disbelief.

And the plot, such as it is, is so full of holes it makes the sloppily constructed, acted and filmed Last Crusade look like a Kubrick film.

There's a couple of plot holes here and there, a really long storyline that you could take out of the movie altogether without affecting hardly anything, and an ending which — depending on how cynical you want to be — arguably comes like a corporate mission statement.

And thinking about plot holes in a movie like Jack Reacher, isn't in the movie's benefit.

Between the mind - bending dungeons, heart pieces to uncover, and the vicious enemies to battle, Twilight Princess still managed to keep the gameplay varied with memorable plot - based events and chill hangout spots, like the majestic fishing hole.

The Bad Ape comedy often plays like Dobby in «Harry Potter» and can be too cute at times; the ending has a few plot holes and utilizes some convenient elements in order to reach its conclusion; and while it would be hard to say what should be cut, the film runs on a bit too long at two hours and 20 minutes.

What at first sounded like the unlikely premise for a cheap knock - off proves to be the genuine article, a heartfelt meditation on ambition and aging that lightly steps through potential plot - holes with the nimble agility of a championship fighter.

Plot holes abound, with all sorts of coincidences forcing things along in lieu of character action, and while that set - up could actually work if The Circle turned into a The Game - like conspiracy thriller, it just limps to an unsatisfying end that doesn't wrap up enough dangling threads.

While the effects, photography, and costuming (though Rudolph is made to look like a miniature member of the»80s band a-ha) are decent, Karey Kirkpatrick and Larry Wilson's script has a fair share of irritating plot holes (just exactly why is Tony able to have psychic visions?)

If you like to structure your book before you write it, send your editor a detailed outline, or a detailed 10 - page plot summary to see if he or she can spot any potential holes.

Unless it's on a promo from a subscription list like BookBub, I know when I buy something for $ 0.99 it may have typos, plot holes or be formatted terribly.

She breaks a lot of writing «rules» that sometimes takes me out of the stories (like changing world facts to cover up plot holes, or overusing the same three adverbs with every dialogue tag), but that doesn't mean I can't enjoy her stories!

That does make me think of one of the most obvious plot - holes, though: how come in the very first mission agents have access to things like laser turrets when that technology isn't even around at that point?

Items like super bombs and abilities like the speed boost, plus the addition of the Crateria area and the post-Mother Brain plot twist help fill in the holes between this game and the others, not to mention it all freshens things up considerably.

I'll re-do my post over on the US blog, but i'm really hoping this delay is to make sure the whole game is decent, no disappointing story with plot holes that only rely around set pieces like uncharted 3!

I like how the «black hole» plot from the original game seems to have had new life breathed into it here, with greater prominence via the whole portal storyline.

The hot, intense canvases in «Sirens,» at DC Moore, have titles like «Conflagration With Bangs» (2015) and «Red Hot Plot Hole» (2016) and feature flames painted in warm colors and covered with iridescent glitter (the painterly material of the moment).