Not exact matches
Three weeks ago, Missouri lost to Indiana in part because its defensive
line was missing Golden (one of three perhaps indispensible Mizzou players, along with Ray and quarterback Maty Mauk) and because its offensive
line lost the
plot, lost its left guard, and lost its ability to either keep pressure off of Mauk or open
holes for running backs Russell Hansbrough and Marcus Murphy.
Specifically, the horizon is obtained by
plotting null geodesic
lines on the so - called Schwarzschild metric, the solution to the field equations posed by Einstein for describing the gravitation field of a black
hole.
I found it best not to overthink the story
line, as I began to envision a number of
plot holes, but because the film is so involving, the viewer isn't given the opportunity to second guess any of the elements involved here.
When an author submits their first draft for editing, the publisher is looking not so much for
line edits but rather big picture editing needs:
plot holes, inconsistencies, unnecessary diversions, etc..
Susanne went above and beyond, making important
plot suggestions and pointing out
holes in the story, along with providing an excellent job of
line editing and proofreading.
When
line editing, I do not correct or point out issues with the
plot or characterization, though I will point out inconsistencies and blatant
plot holes.
No more disjointed story
lines with
plot holes.