Regardless of how one might feel about its inherently icky subject matter, Dark Crimes needs
more narrative momentum.
Not exact matches
It's the fact the robots are
more human than the people that gives the show its
narrative momentum.
The ongoing absence of
momentum within the
narrative ensures that Agora becomes
more and
more tedious as it unfolds, with the tragic conclusion subsequently unable to pack the emotional punch that Amenábar is clearly striving for - thus cementing the movie's place as a misguided and utterly forgettable piece of work.
At times, there's
more repetition than
narrative momentum.
The inclusion of a few standout sequences (eg Charlie confronts Hans» dying wife) generally compensates, as does the effectiveness of the various performances (ie Rockwell has never been
more entertaining), but the film doesn't wholeheartedly begin to engross until around the one - hour mark - after which point the
narrative's escalating
momentum becomes
more and
more difficult to resist.
With a considerably scattershot plot, one which has a somewhat episode design, Nerdland lacks some of the
narrative momentum that comes from
more cohesive stories.
Shifting between the three main characters in a haphazard, often bewildering manner, Kick - Ass 2 never builds any
narrative momentum, feeling much
more like a routine series of unrelated episodes about Life In These Trying Times.
The
narrative does lag the slightest bit at the midpoint when Carl decides to leave LA behind for a quick trip to Miami and the script loses its focus, but as soon as he gets his hands on that food truck and he's back to being a man on a mission, the film takes off with even
more momentum than before.
The film is relies
more on
momentum and personality than
narrative but that's just fine for this misfit crime spree road comedy.
They become
more so as the
narrative itself becomes repetitive, but for a while, Wheatley maintains a sense of kinetic
momentum that keeps the pieces together.