Sentences with phrase «narrative flow»

All too often jumping from scene to scene with seemingly little attention paid to creating a believable narrative flow.

This is where they're going to look at narrative flow, consistency, logic, story and character development, etc..

-- correcting errors: spelling, grammar, punctuation, dropped words, incorrectly used words — rewriting / revising passages that come across as awkward or ambiguous — pruning wordy or difficult passages — identifying and eliminating repetitive word choices (and «crutch» words)-- ensuring consistent style choices throughout the manuscript — locally restructuring sections to improve narrative flow — flagging continuity errors and significant plot holes

Please submit your contributions at such and such a date so we can make sure we have a good narrative flow before we go to the presses.»

As with all lengthy biographies this one has some points of discontinuity where the description seems to get in the way of the overall narrative flow.

Prioritizing narrative flow and historical accuracy is a challenge that comes with every biopic, but Gray had added pressure; two of the film's producers are Dr. Dre and Ice Cube themselves.

The pacing is slack, but Thornton and scripter Ted Tally's basic narrative flow is fine and fluid as the story moves from its varied and well - photographed (by Barry Markowitz) locations: the vast Texas expanse; the ranch in Mexico with its (yes) pretty horses; the dark, dirty prison where Cole and Rawlins find themselves with Blevins later in the story.

The passion the duo have for the Golden Age Hollywood era of movies is quite admirable, but they should've paid just as much attention to reworking the script for a more consistent narrative flow.

We talk a lot here at TKZ about how important pacing is, and transitions go along way to creating that seamless narrative flow you need as your story shifts in time, location, or point - of view.

When compared to structurally complex music, a game level that has an interesting narrative flow will also require a soundtrack with a flow to match.

After last year's trailer showing off an intense narrative flow during The Video Game Awards, I know I'm not alone when I say «WE NEED MORE.»

The Wayward Isles is designed to fill what we see as a gap in the market for story - centric RPGs in which the focus is on drama and narrative flow rather than statistics and inventory management.

Original photos and commentary on relief sculptures on view at the Metropolitan Museum of Art by painter Altoon Sultan who writes:»... my favorite form of sculpture is the relief, both high and low, which may be because it is closer to painting in being tethered to a plane; sensitivity of line is emphasized and narrative flows along the surface.»

The paintings develop a distinct narrative flow as the viewer follows her track, taking part in what she has found of interest such as a flushed bird, a stand of trees, a bog, or footprints along a lake.

«Narratives flow freely from these forms as they mirror and reflect the viewer.»

«Can you consider presence in absence when narrative flows and then opens into blankness, absent vowels, truant bodies.»

The research is good, the conclusions solid, but the prose is often dense and the narrative flow poor, while every chapter is burdened with several hundred endnotes, far beyond the needs of the average reader.

I have read the passage you refer to (a number of times) and there is no doubt that the narrative flows much better without it.

Moreover, if we compare the fragments that a modern historian will glean as reliable against, for example, the narrative flow of the passion narratives in any of the Gospels, it is hard to deny that the historian has lost something.

Weathers writes with humor of his ordeal, but so many passages by his wife, children and friends dam the narrative flow.

Doesn't have a lot of narrative flow, but that is ok, since the segments are funny and smartly satirical.

While Furman shows a mostly steady hand with his actors, the narrative flow trips things up considerably.

In their place, a new trio (Brian Duffield, Akiva Goldsman, Mark Bomback) has done serious surgery to «Insurgent,» streamlining the story line, changing key plot points, inventing critical elements and in general improving the narrative flow.

The narrative flow is a bit awkward.

But as an experiment in stuttering and disrupting the narrative flow established and honored over the six previous entries, the movie is a curiously compelling beast.

In Amarcord, characters are too often mere caricatures, and events, despite being presented as those occurring as the seasons of one year pass, feel disjointed and contrived more for their effect as spectacle than as parts of a narrative flow.

Regardless, the actors fill their roles perfectly and the narrative flows nicely as a story being told be a grandfather to his grandson.

There isn't much of a narrative flow to the movie, which was directed by Taylor Hackford and credited to four writers (producer Art Linson, standup comic Jeff Ross, Richard LaGravenese and Lewis Friedman).

While the narrative flow of Woodrow's character in Bellflower is presented as a relentless succession of inter-related episodes, I'd argue that everything in the film is either reconstructed or projected by Woodrow from a single point in the film.

While Ferrara's film may lack Scorsese's rhythm and likeability, he brings impulsive beats and a narrative flow that feels so wild and impetuous I'm almost convinced Ferrara was just as coked out as his titular lieutenant during the filming process (which he openly admits).

They had to maintain the narrative flow after the first Avengers cross-over that came right before this one and still deliver a strong solo movie.

A smart and casually brilliant work of fiction, the author's characters exude a demand for understanding and compassion above all else in a narrative flow that is forgivably meandering.

Unlike previous PvE modes, where four players are either fending off waves of enemies or completing objectives ripped straight from Overwatch's multiplayer modes, Retribution has a sense of distinct purpose and narrative flow, as Reaper, McCree, Genji, and Moira progress through the streets of Venice in order to escape a botched infiltration mission, taking out whoever decides to get in their way.

Wii U owners will also have access to Tong's Rescue mission and the entire Missing Link chapter which has been integrated into the narrative flow of the Director's Cut.

They enhance the character, and are short enough not to disrupt the narrative flow.

The artist designed each session's narrative flow, while I covered academic objectives, visuals, and support.

And if you want to improve your narrative flow, this post is a helpful one to read: Techniques for Developing Your e-Learning Narrative Flow.Quickly add stories to your e-Learning with the easy - to - use authoring tool, Lectora Inspire.

A developmental editor, who looks at your manuscript as a whole for big problems like plot holes or poor narrative flow, may suggest massive changes.

The narrative flows and is never dull or flat (Jane M).

Did you change anything about your writing process to accommodate this narrative flow?

Every time I felt myself melding into the story it would go wandering off on some detail or tidbit that would interrupt the narrative flow.

I am now rewriting huge chunks of the book and shifting around a lot of the text to make sure the narrative flows well.

I have a stronger sense of a narrative flow and realize the different beats I need to bring a reader through on the journey I'm taking her.

But I'm sure you agree that mistakes are just so jarring, they toss one right out of the narrative flow and back into inconvenient reality.

Here's the rundown: — Tongs's Rescue mission and the entire Missing Link chapter have been integrated seamlessly into the narrative flow of the Director's Cut.