Sentences with phrase «narratives pacing issues»

On the flipside the author of the Games TM review found Arno to be a dull lead character and through that was bothered more by the narratives pacing issues.

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Due to issues with pacing and control of the narrative, it doesn't quite come together, and the necessary chill isn't properly refrigerated.

There are other issues here, ones that involve pacing and tone and narrative momentum and Bilbo's own lack of significance in a story that's allegedly all about him, but all I can think about right now, 30 minutes after exiting the theater, is how badly I need to go see it again at a reasonable 24 frames per second in regular old 2D in the hope that I can fully immerse myself into this too - long, too - repetitive saga.

Suffering from pacing and monochromatic tonal issues — various types of drab torture for two hours — «Unbroken» is also overlong and eventually settles into a slog with little narrative drive.

OKO ASHEWO A Nigerian sandwich of Pulp Fiction and Taxi Driver suffers from some dodgy narrative choices and pacing issues, but knocks out some compelling footage of a taxi cruising around Lagos (with a Gandalf The Grey hood ornament).

Besides its new setting, Fantastic Beasts marks another first for Rowling — it's her first screenplay for one of her stories, and as such the movie suffers from issues any first - time screenwriter might encounter, namely pacing and narrative structure.

There's little doubt, however, that such issues pale in comparison to unconscionable deliberateness with which the narrative unfolds, as the egregiously slow pace heightens the movie's myriad of problems and ensures that the midsection, which primarily revolves around Katniss» solo attempts at surviving, is nothing short of disastrous (ie it's just dull, mostly).

In addition to helping you determine the best methods for organizing and presenting your material, check for structural issues, theme, pacing, style, plot, character development and arcs, point of view, dialogue, narrative arcs, transitions, and so on.

Developmental editing on these projects may address issues like sustaining the original characters but creating new challenges in their private and public lives, points of view, and life cycles, as well as the usual core elements — story, relationships, pacing, narrative structure.

Barring some pacing issues in its narrative, Sony Santa Monica have breathed new life into Kratos and the God of War series, and I can't wait to see what's next.

The characters are decent albeit generic, but the issues with the narrative and it's pacing made it hard to remain invested.