But despite the number
of subplots going on that include parallels to a particular commander - in - chief, amnesia, and betrayal to name a few, Vaughn and Jane Goldman manage to tell a story that gels just enough to avoid becoming incomprehensible.
There are a lot
of subplots going on and it was good fun to have them all meet up after six months apart.
Not exact matches
While there are many, many compelling things about the film, I found myself gravitating toward a teeny - tiny
subplot: when both Joel (Jim Carrey) and Clementine (Kate Winslet) accidentally hear the tapes each recorded
of the other in their attempts to erase each other from their memory, they get a glimpse
of what their former romantic partner was thinking
of them at the time things
went south.
However, the film is poorly written and is full
of unnecessary
subplots that don't
go anywhere.
It's just as clear, however, that the film's incongruously languid pace stands as an almost insurmountable obstacle virtually from the get -
go, as filmmakers Jon Hurwitz and Hayden Schlossberg have employed an episodic structure that becomes more and more problematic as the thin narrative unfolds - with the ongoing emphasis on
subplots of a decidedly underwhelming nature (eg Jim's continuing efforts at resisting the advances
of a sultry neighbor) compounding the movie's increasingly lackluster atmosphere.
But this time out, Gore Verbinski «s last
go - round, it seemed the only way they could cram in more Sparrow was to include a hallucination
subplot in which we get multiple Sparrows talking to each other — the film abandoning even the pretense
of interest in the bland, chemistry - free romance between Keira Knightley and Orlando Bloom.
Now each
of these
subplots do make sense within the overall plot
of the movie, but it felt like there wasn't enough to
go with, so the writers filled in with fluff.
That's a pretty big strike against the movie from the start, and although Blitz tries his best to mold the story into a sort
of adult «Breakfast Club,» the characters are paper - thin and none
of the
subplots pay off, including a potential romance between Eloise and a hunky wedding crasher (Thomas Cocquerel) that
goes nowhere.
Subplots such as Fred's troubles with his girlfriend, Willy (Higgins (Evan Almighty) playing Santa's right - hand elf) trying to get together with a lovely fellow helper (Banks, Invincible), Fred's friendship with a precocious African - American orphan (Thompson), and the unendurable dysfunctional family squabbles only add to the feeling that the script by Dan Fogelman (Cars) started with a kernel
of inspiration and little knowledge
of where to
go with it once it is set up.
In a
subplot that
goes nowhere, at least nowhere interesting, Norah, under false pretenses, befriends a woman (Mary Lynn Rajskub) whose mother was a victim in one
of the crime scene mop - ups.
Upon presenting her novel to the local publicist, he condemns her sequestering the romantic elements that her ilk (other women) should want to read in favor
of a horror
subplot involving things
going bump in the night.
It perhaps
goes out
of its way to resolve some
subplots that would have been better left alone, but that didn't matter so much when I was grinning like an idiot at the pure fun
of it all.
Dolan
goes on to explain that «this «villain»
subplot, albeit funny and entertaining, didn't feel like it belonged to the rest
of the story, which ended up not being on heroes or their nemesis, bur [sic] rather on childhood, and its dreams.»
There is too much
going on as the film keeps
going back and forth between all
of its
subplots.
Once Garant and Lennon's
subplot merges with the demonic insanity
going on with Corddry and Bibb, along with the introduction
of Bibb's free - spirited sister (Lindhome), things reach a zany peak that bring plenty
of laughs.
And he winds up being convinced to
go for a ride on the Spatterbox, the yacht
of a well - to - do blowhard, with Danny, where they endure a number
of close calls (depicted unconvincingly with rear projection scenery) before getting lost at sea, a
subplot with all the drama
of an «ALF» episode.
But a distracting
subplot about a homophobic, off - his - rocker neighbor simmers distractingly on the margins
of the narrative, before giving way to a truly ruinous plot turn — a genre leap so misjudged that all the goodwill Silva has built up until that point
goes up in flames.
Odin doesn't cross the line into criminal acts without the injection
of a drug abuse
subplot that has him
going off
of the deep end.
Considering this is a comedy and most comedies suck nowadays, I am not
going to spend a lot
of time talking about some
of the silly
subplots that
go on in the film.
Adapted from the novel
of the same name by Dennis Lahane, Live by Night is massive in scope, containing a number
of subplots, locales, and characters to
go along with it.
Of course, because none of the subplots and multiple characters carry any weight, this also means that most of the serviceable acting performances (Affleck has rounded up an impressive cast of names including Zoe Saldana, Chris Cooper, Sienna Miller, Bredan Gleeson etc) go to wast
Of course, because none
of the subplots and multiple characters carry any weight, this also means that most of the serviceable acting performances (Affleck has rounded up an impressive cast of names including Zoe Saldana, Chris Cooper, Sienna Miller, Bredan Gleeson etc) go to wast
of the
subplots and multiple characters carry any weight, this also means that most
of the serviceable acting performances (Affleck has rounded up an impressive cast of names including Zoe Saldana, Chris Cooper, Sienna Miller, Bredan Gleeson etc) go to wast
of the serviceable acting performances (Affleck has rounded up an impressive cast
of names including Zoe Saldana, Chris Cooper, Sienna Miller, Bredan Gleeson etc) go to wast
of names including Zoe Saldana, Chris Cooper, Sienna Miller, Bredan Gleeson etc)
go to waste.
What waits at the end
of the tunnel ties into a
subplot involving a Mexican police officer and his young son, but it
goes much further into the dark heart
of this battle.
Sure, Nicloux often
goes a little too far with his deliberate provocation (excessive gore shocks until it just dulls the senses, while in one scene, there's a close - up
of a leech - infested penis), and a
subplot involving a Vietnamese prostitute isn't quite fleshed out enough beyond being a mere vehicle for Ulliel's feverish temperament, but this is brave, exciting filmmaking, and a fine amuse bouche to Apocalypse Now's meatier take on the same subject matter.
Other
subplots freely come and
go — the most prominent centers on a stylist (singer Nicki Minaj) coming between married employees (Common and Eve)-- but the twin strengths
of the movie remain its amusing asides and, across the field, its civic - minded seriousness.
Even though he's the only one actually committing here, Michael B. Jordan might as well have been phased in from another brand
of C - grade rom - com as his super-sized cheesy, level 11 cliché romantic
subplot butts heads with the should - be elbow nudging plot line
going on with the other fellas.
Add into the mix a
subplot involving Hans» cancer striken wife and a mysterious masked killer who is
going around taking down underworld figures, and «Seven Psychopaths» has a lot
of narrative balls to juggle, and doesn't always handle them satisfactorily.
As you can clearly see, there is a lot
going on here, with dozens
of characters wrapped up with several
subplots in the elaborate tapestry that is «Avengers: Infinity War.»
The film thereafter establishes itself as a fast - paced, downright fun horror - movie ride that's ideally suited to its Midnight Madness slot, although it's admittedly difficult not to question the inclusion
of an entirely useless
subplot detailing the ongoing exploits
of Brent's best friend (ie it seems like the two storylines are
going to converge at some point, but this never happens).
Neither
of these
subplots connected with me as much as I wanted them to, and even though both have a number
of strong moments overall each is depicted with such timid restraint I found it difficult to care about anything either man was currently
going through.
Scripters Simon Boyes and Adam Mason attempt to liven things up by sprinkling the proceedings with distinctly oddball
subplots, including an assassin dying
of a terminal illness, but, like everything else contained in this mess
of a screenplay, such digressions wind up
going absolutely nowhere (ie there's no satisfactory payoff for anything here).
Additionally, the romance
subplot between Chiwetel Ejiofor and Nicole Kidman never really
goes anywhere; it's an unnecessary distraction that doesn't further the main storyline or add much to the development
of their characters.
One
of them — a
subplot about money owned to a bookie (Terrence Howard) that literally
goes nowhere — is unnecessary.
Aside from the complete lack
of comedy, there are
subplots that
go absolutely nowhere.
The Bob
subplot in Fulci's City
of the Living Dead used to make me furious and I still roll my eyes, but the anger is
gone.
Then there are the fan - vexing elements
of his supposed half - human heritage and a strong romantic
subplot with his companion Grace (a doctor who performs heart surgery right after
going to the opera).
A
subplot about Handy and President Cole running against each other in some contrived mayoral race that showcases every variety
of quirky senior citizen (the nudist, the potty - mouthed old biddy usually played by Betty White, the sassy ethnic earth mama, usually Asian or black) doesn't
go anywhere and just makes an already laboured piece seem interminable.
WHY: As far as WWII movies
go, this stodgy historical drama is pretty forgettable, dragged down by a sappy, East - meets - West romantic
subplot that's become all too common with these types
of films.
In Hollywood math, the 61 - year - old actress is the perfect age to be a septuagenarian's love interest, which she does in one
of the
subplots that doesn't particularly
go anywhere.
This actually results in two
subplots: one having John coerce Ella to confronting the man (with a shotgun hidden down his pant leg) and the other involving the revelation
of a long - ago affair that
went on under Ella's nose.
In fact, it might just be his worst movie to date — an adaptation
of Ben Fountain's 2012 satirical war novel that's plagued by some really stilted dialogue and acting, as well as a number
of awful
subplots that
go nowhere.
We never see Jules» various meetings with the prospective CEOs, instead forced to take her word that they
went as poorly as she insists, while a third - act
subplot involving her seemingly awesome husband is horribly mishandled, completely missing the point
of his actions.
Cemiria Dawn, the creator
of the petition, then
goes on to provide a bulleted list
of itemized complaints about the film, ranging everywhere from Luke Sykwalker's characterization to the «Cheap, sometimes childish humor» to the entire Canto Bight
subplot with Rose and Finn.
Though uneven and hampered by
go - nowhere
subplots, Rick Famuyiwa's Sundance hit mostly lives up to its title, especially when it hangs within the margins
of the margins alongside teenage geeks living in the L.A. suburb
of Inglewood.
There are a solid four plots
going on in Mother's Day, and they all have their own
subplots and character arcs, which doesn't mean it's necessarily hard to keep track, it's just hard to care about one or more
of the characters when there are so many.
If you have
subplots going nowhere, scenes that advance nothing or characters that fail to come alive; if parts
of your story are told in the wrong sequence, you've begun it too early or dragged on the ending too long: a structural editor will pick that up.
I ADORED Leviathan — that trilogy was one
of the few where I've actually cared about the romance as anything more than a
subplot, mainly because it was so gradual and creeping and wonderful Scott Westerfeld is a brilliant world builder and every time I try and write steampunk, I just sit there
going, «I'll never be as good as this... sigh.»
Everywhere you
go there are eccentric characters, strange
subplots and weird configurations
of rocks and trees which lead you to new puzzles and surprises.
The hosts
go deep into some
of the
subplots of that scandal and what it means for Facebook, elections, and your privacy.