Sentences with phrase «one's second draft»

The cover letter was awesome (I want to hire me) and second draft of the resume was great too!

And nobody creates better second drafts without the intervention of someone else.

In this writing session, you'll learn an actionable method for approaching your all - important second draft.

Leaving the theater afterwards I wondered how much better Swanberg's films might be with a little more time for second drafts or rehearsal.

A more complete second draft?

The plot is absurd, the script littered with clangers that should have been removed at second draft stage, and the action sequences suffer from being under - lit and difficult to follow.

IPCC AR5 Second Draft Figure 1.4 with annotations: red squares are 2012 and 2013 (to date) HadCRUT4.

Chicago native with blue - collar roots, Joe Niego was a star college basketball player and second draft choice of the NBA's Houston Rockets.

Cover of a certain script @knatelee and I turned in last night to @simondavidkinberg #newmutants second draft A photo posted by Josh Boone (@joshboonemovies) on Apr 15, 2016...

Beta readers read your rewritten and lightly edited second draft.

4) moving goalposts — You mean like when Steve Mc examined the «In Press» and «Accepted» citations in IPCC AR4 Second Draft Chapter 6 to verify whether Wahl and Ammann 200x had received unusual and special treatment?

It was after that dark second draft that Jo suddenly found the melody; then, she was away to the races.

Even if there will be no formal second draft, it is vital to create the space for students to critique their production and to learn from their critical thinking, that of their peers, and your feedback.

You can see BUSD's second draft LCAP here.

I've often considered first and second drafts as ways of leaving hints for myself on the page which I later pick up and accept or reject, depending on impact, metaphor, or plot.

And when I typed it up, it became a very real second draft — things would vanish or change.

The Developmental Editing package also includes a Skype call to discuss your revision strategy, day - to - day email support throughout the revision process, a second assessment and report on your revised second draft, and longer access to weekly email support afterwards.

Below for your review are the first and second draft revisions for Version 4.0:

What's bizarre is that an examination of the comments submitted by IPCC reviewers following both the first and second draft of Chapter 5 — and the responses to them — suggests that those involved appear to have taken part in a shared hallucination.

[On the sixth in the ARKANE series now the process is:] Get to a good second draft myself, then send to my editor for structural and line edits, two passes by the editor, rewrites, then send to the proofreader before publication.

Cover of a certain script @knatelee and I turned in last night to @simondavidkinberg #newmutants second draft

In retrospect, it will be seen as fitting that Finance Minister Bill Morneau started working on the second draft of his planned overhaul of corporate taxation during the 2017 Thanksgiving weekend.

We were just going to press with an issue that included an outstanding article by Father Paul Mankowski, S.J., on the second draft of «One in Christ Jesus: A Pastoral Response to the Concerns of Women for Church and Society.»

The Holy See returned the bishops» proposal in the summer of 1998, indicating that a second draft of the Application was needed because the first draft did not satisfactorily implement the Pope's vision for Catholic higher education.

One difference between a first draft and a second draft is that what you finally say has ironed out anything that might get you into trouble.

The second draft of the travel ban omitted Iraq from its list of banned countries, a negotiation Iraq agreed to when the U.S. promised to send back Iraqi nationals living in the U.S.

You think, well, inevitably the quality of that (never mind what God does with it) is going to be first or second draft at best.

For my second draft breakdown I decided to go with Khalil Mack, outside linebacker for the University at Buffalo.

The Sparks made Zheng their second draft selection.

The NIH fired SI, citing potential conflicts of interest, and an in - house staff prepared a second draft for the federal Center for the Evaluation of Risks to Human Reproduction.

Two team members used the updated version to assess 41 studies, and made small adjustments in wording to arrive at a second draft version.

Southern Weekly's editors capitulated and agreed to a second draft, but Mr. Tuo published a third draft that editors hadn't seen.

The deputy to substantive minister Elizabeth Ofosu - Agyare also stated that it is during their «tenure that the first and second drafts of the film bill have come into being and although parliament is yet to pass it for the president to append his signature, stakeholders can lobby parliamentarians so the film bill is passed as the ministry continues to push for the passage.»

The exact cost of the Campus Framework remains unknown, but renovations to the Carrier Dome and Archbold Gymnasium — two of the projects included in the Campus Framework's second draft — are estimated to cost $ 250 million total.

Last May, Chancellor Kent Syverud released a second draft of the Campus Framework project as part of his flagship Fast Forward Syracuse initiative.

A second draft will be released in October 2017, ahead of an eight - week consultation.

If they are rejected, a second draft would be presented.

If that second draft is voted down, legislators could change the lines (within 2 percent) of the proposal.

Cuomo repeated his threat to veto the current «hyper - political» set of draft maps LATFOR produced, but remained silent on his intentions for a second draft expected early next week.

Second drafts are about paring things down to size.

Then write a second draft and revise that.