The
otherwise naturalistic dialogue and bleak settings are invested with a touch of poetry through the integration of some
simple but effective metaphors — Iris» alienation is
figured by a scene where she finds herself literally disconnected by the telephone services, while her disorientation is visualised by her wandering dreamily through the storage corridors of a Lost Property Office where she has begun working, just another neglected object waiting to be found and loved again.
But you'd be better to talk to your loan provider and find out the proper details on interest rate and loan structure from them as I'm just assuming 168 monthly payments on
simple loan interest to arrive at those
figures — you don't give enough detail to do
otherwise I think.