A bit of a trim here and there would have helped
the overall pace of the work.
Not exact matches
Many
of the trends seen in last year's Report Card have picked up steam, with assets under management and productivity rising at a healthy
pace because advisors are
working with fewer clients,
overall, but more wealthy clients
The real benefit to this sort
of work would be in improving
overall speed and
pace during the run, but as a strength athlete, you need to approach this with care, since being too aggressive here will not help you.
Some
of the minor characters don't
work as well for the film as they do for the book due to the
pacing of the film and
overall narrative.
The first half
of Atonement is almost flawless, but the
pacing is off enough in the second half — too rushed in some spots, too languid in others — to mar the
overall work.
These changes should actually
work together to slow the
pace of each round
overall, even if more people will get to be Thanos due to his adjusted stats.
If you are
working on a rough draft
of a novel, a development editor will help you with elements such as plot, character development, narrative and dialogue, continuity,
pacing and
overall impression.
They can tell you which parts
of the book read fast or slow, which ones don't seem to fit, how the
pacing works overall, how the book made them feel, where their interest waned, etc..
In this post I am referring to developmental editing or structural editing, which looks at the
overall work to identify problems with characterization, plot, tone, point
of view,
pacing, transitions, the organization
of material and so on.
The episode
overall kept a quick
pace, a fact that
worked in favor
of the investigation story line, but hurt the new characters.
Parker's
work is an attempt to illustrate his
overall take on the most pressing issues
of the day through aggressively youthful and rebellious fast -
paced mark - making, compositional intensity, strident colors, and an anti-authoritarian approach to established ideologies.
The DAC concluded Pastore had a class 4 or «marked impairment» in terms
of her daily living and gave her an
overall assessment
of class 3 («moderate impairment») when considering the assessments in the other three categories: social functioning; concentration, persistence and
pace; and deterioration or decompensation in
work or
work - like settings.
SREA
works with clients on identifying the grade
of lots, lot price allocation based on the grade
of the final home price positioning establishing a market segmentation and
overall community product matrix that accelerates the home sales
pace.