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planning style used by the writer.
Not exact matches
On Monday, Musk tweeted that instead of disposing that leftover earth, he
plans to recycle it into interlocking, Lego -
style bricks that can be
used to build houses and other structures.
Despite
using on - demand services to
plan the rest of her evening — Uber to go to her event and Rent The Runway for her dress — but she couldn't find a startup that would bring a blow - out appointment and beauty
styling to her door.
We'll
use live, real - world market research on advertising
styles, then
plan our online strategy based on concrete numerical results.
Bank of America Corp.
plans to stop lending to companies that make assault -
style guns
used for non-military purposes.
Presentation
plan: Whether you're
using a pitch deck or a written business
plan, the information in your presentation
plan will be, more or less, the same as in your working
plan but worded differently and
styled for the eyes of an outsider.
For example, Airbnb
uses Google Maps and customized markers to help users figure out where available rooms are and how much they cost so they can
plan a getaway that fits their budget and
style.
The
plan was to roll out ThirdLove's product line in the spring of 2014 with seven distinct
styles, and then
use the data collected — including sales, returns, and feedback — to fine - tune the bras» designs and future orders.
There are celebrations
planned at Stonehenge and in Santa Barbara (though I'm betting they'll be very different in
style), but even if you're not in one of the places where the sun being at its zenith is a traditional occasion to party, you might want to consider putting that extra sunlight to good
use.
State Sen. Bill Galvano is floating a series of
plans that would change how Floridians buy and
use guns, including one that would increase the minimum age to buy a military -
style rifle to 21.
There are a variety of strategic -
planning models, and the one
used by a company will depend on its leadership
style, company culture, size and previous
planning experience.
In this meal
plan, we'll be
using mung beans in the Savory Dahl -
Style Steel Cut Oats, Wild Rice Bowl, Tempeh and Cabbage Chili, One Pan Root Vegetable, Swiss Chard and Mung Bean Bake in Coconut Curry, and the Tempeh and Kale Enchiladas!
Meanwhile the boys were walking around the store
planning their defense — MacGyver
style — in case of Zombie attack — things like how they could
use duck tape to modify nail guns.
Since the best way to recreate commercial -
style pizza dough at home is to
use the same slow - rising technique the pros
use, you're going to have to
plan ahead at least 24 hours.
Let's
use Giroud as a
plan B sub when our fast passing and attacking
style is not working ate in games, like the 70 minute.
Depending on the game to who starts and if that
plan doesn't work then go with
plan b and
use the other CF who will be a different
style.
This is an incredibly difficult question to answer for a variety of reasons, most importantly because over the years our once vaunted «beautiful»
style of play has become a shadow of it's former self, only to be replaced by a less than stellar «plug and play» mentality where players play out of position and adjustments / substitutions are rarely forthcoming before the 75th minute... if you look at our current players, very few would make sense in the traditional Wengerian system... at present, we don't have the personnel to move the ball quickly from deep - lying position, efficient one touch midfielders that can make the necessary through balls or the disciplined and pacey forwards to stretch defences into wide positions, without the aid of the backs coming up into the final 3rd, so that we can attack the defensive lanes in the same clinical fashion we did years ago... on this current squad, we have only 1 central defender on staf, Mustafi, who seems to have any prowess in the offensive zone or who can even pass two zones through so that we can advance play quickly out of our own end (I have seen some inklings that suggest Holding might have some offensive qualities but too early to tell)... unfortunately Mustafi has a tendency to get himself in trouble when he gets overly aggressive on the ball... from our backs out wide, we've seen pace from the likes of Bellerin and Gibbs and the spirited albeit offensively stunted play of Monreal, but none of these players possess the skill - set required in the offensive zone for the new Wenger scheme which requires deft touches, timely runs to the baseline and consistent crossing, especially when Giroud was playing and his ratio of scored goals per clear chances was relatively low (better last year though)... obviously I like Bellerin's future prospects, as you can't teach pace, but I do worry that he regressed last season, which was obvious to Wenger because there was no way he would have
used Ox as the right side wing - back so often knowing that Barcelona could come calling in the off - season, if he thought otherwise... as for our midfielders, not a single one, minus the more confident Xhaka I watched played for the Swiss national team a couple years ago, who truly makes sense under the traditional Wenger model... Ramsey holds onto the ball too long, gives the ball away cheaply far too often and abandons his defensive responsibilities on a regular basis (doesn't score enough recently to justify): that being said, I've always thought he does possess a little something special, unfortunately he thinks so too... Xhaka is a little too slow to ever boss the midfield and he tends to telegraph his one true strength, his long ball play: although I must admit he did get a bit better during some points in the latter part of last season... it always made me wonder why whenever he played with Coq Wenger always seemed to play Francis in a more advanced role on the pitch... as for Coq, he is way too reckless at the wrong times and has exhibited little offensive prowess yet finds himself in and around the box far too often... let's face it Wenger was ready to throw him in the trash heap when injuries forced him to
use Francis and then he had the nerve to act like this was all part of a bigger Wenger constructed
plan... he like Ramsey, Xhaka and Elneny don't offer the skills necessary to satisfy the quick transitory nature of our old offensive scheme or the stout defensive mindset needed to protect the defensive zone so that our offensive players can remain aggressive in the final third... on the front end, we have Ozil, a player of immense skill but stunted by his physical demeanor that tends to offend, the fact that he's been played out of position far too many times since arriving and that the players in front of him, minus Sanchez, make little to no sense considering what he has to offer (especially Giroud); just think about the quick counter-attack offence in Real or the space and protection he receives in the German National team's midfield, where teams couldn't afford to focus too heavily on one individual... this player was a passing «specialist» long before he arrived in North London, so only an arrogant or ignorant individual would try to reinvent the wheel and / or not surround such a talent with the necessary components... in regards to Ox, Walcott and Welbeck, although they all possess serious talents I see them in large part as headless chickens who are on the injury table too much, lack the necessary first - touch and / or lack the finishing flair to warrant their inclusion in a regular starting eleven; I would say that, of the 3, Ox showed the most upside once we went to a back 3, but even he became a bit too consumed by his pending contract talks before the season ended and that concerned me a bit... if I had to choose one of those 3 players to stay on it would be Ox due to his potential as a plausible alternative to Bellerin in that wing - back position should we continue to
use that formation... in Sanchez, we get one of the most committed skill players we've seen on this squad for some years but that could all change soon, if it hasn't already of course... strangely enough, even he doesn't make sense given the constructs of the original Wenger offensive model because he holds onto the ball too long and he will give the ball up a little too often in the offensive zone... a fact that is largely forgotten due to his infectious energy and the fact that the numbers he has achieved seem to justify the means... finally, and in many ways most crucially, Giroud, there is nothing about this team or the offensive system that Wenger has traditionally employed that would even suggest such a player would make sense as a starter... too slow, too inefficient and way too easily dispossessed... once again, I think he has some special skills and, at times, has showed some world - class qualities but he's lack of mobility is an albatross around the necks of our offence... so when you ask who would be our best starting 11, I don't have a clue because of the 5 or 6 players that truly deserve a place in this side, 1 just arrived, 3 aren't under contract beyond 2018 and the other was just sold to Juve... man, this is theraputic because following this team is like an addiction to heroin without the benefits
«Well, we've just got to figure out what's our best personnel, what's our best
style, how we're going to be able to move the ball,» Manning answered about what ways the offense can be improved, a clear indictment of McAdoo's
plan that
uses many hands and many feet and many numbers.
Liverpool is not arsenal... its not d drubbing but the
style of football on display... barca played like arsenal; trying to work it inside the net with messi and Suarez neutralized with minimum fuss... now, we
plan on
using Walcott as 9 against them???? only 1 winner there and its sure as fuq not that fraud....
Moreover, I really want to hear from Mike McGalliard (either here on TLT where he's commented before or perhaps on next week's episode) how he
plans to «scale up» a Carpinteria -
style operation at West Adams
using only federal reimbursement dollars.
There are a lot of different
styles to pick from, and depending on your body type, physical ability, and how frequently you
plan to
use your carrier, you may want to choose one type over another.
Using positive, gentle and developmentally appropriate methods, we create a step - by - step, individualized sleep
plan tailored to your family's needs, your parenting
style and your child's level of development and personality.
The best
style for you will vary based on how you
plan to
use your mattress cover.
It's easy to find plenty of cheap co sleep products for baby when you're
planning to
use this
style of sleeper.
Though there have been various kinds of parenting that have been considered «mainstream» over the years, the parenting subcultures I most often hear referred to as «alternative» parenting
styles tend to be the ones that some folks might describe as being kind of «hippie - ish» in nature: moms who intentionally
plan to birth outside of hospitals; moms who breastfeed beyond six months or a year; folks who babywear, especially if they do so more than they
use a stroller or continue to do so well into toddlerhood; parents who co-sleep or
use a family bed, especially past early infancy; free range parents; unschooling parents, and so on and so forth.
«It's hard to stomach but it's true: a self -
styled educator pulling kids out of school and
using them to stand in the way of a
plan to improve educational opportunities for every child.»
The approved
plans call for an $ 87.1 million mixed -
use redevelopment, featuring a new 120 - room extended - stay hotel operated by Hart Hotels, plus 185 studio, one - bedroom and two - bedroom loft -
style market - rate apartments.
The goal is to allow for residential development without stifling the influx of tech and new media businesses to the area's loft -
style office space, according to the New York Observer.Proponents of the
plan hope retailers would follow the new residents to the neighborhood and help create a 24 - hour mixed -
use community.
This week, the families of the Newtown shooting victims
plan to be in Hartford, listening as lawyers lay out in state Supreme Court their case that the companies that manufactured and sold the military -
style assault rifle
used by the gunman bear responsibility for the attack in which 26 people, including 20 children, were killed.
It's a game
plan Gov. Andrew M. Cuomo has
used repeatedly to construct election -
style campaigns for legislation he wanted to enact during his six years in office.
A lot of information is conveyed in the
style and formatting you
use, and the care and effort you put into the general presentation of the
plan.
In Tucson's historic Armory Park neighborhood, John Wesley Miller is constructing a community of 99 solar - powered Mission -
style houses that
use up to 80 percent less energy than the surrounding houses yet sell in the low $ 200,000 s. Brian Bombeck, president of the Sacramento Land division of U.S. Home, is overseeing a grand
plan to install solar roofs on nearly half the 1,880 houses in a development near the California state capital.
Hispanic families are in turn more likely to
use religious coping
styles positively and view the challenge of raising a child with ASD as a test of their faith and part of a divine
plan.
A great way to combine resistance training and explosive cardio if you're mostly doing home workouts is to
use workouts that have both types of moves written into them (circuit training
style), and follow a 3 - 4 workout a week
plan.
As a general guide I list below the various names of eating
styles without
using the «D» word,
using an approximate 2,100 - calorie per - day eating
plan as an example.
I.F.
plans that require full - day fasting drastically reduce your calorie intake, so if you are
using a
style of I.F. which requires you to fast for 24 hours twice per week, you're reducing your food intake by about 30 %.
The book includes a full range of options you should select when
planning your nutrients, your activities, the training
style you're going to
use and more importantly, the fat loss plateaus.
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(Make sure to start the lean closet series from the beginning... you'll need your answers from Define Your Personal
Style & Lifestyle Essentials to
use Pinterest to
plan your wardrobe in this exercise!)
I have a mall trip
planned next week, so I think I'll hit up NY&C o. I
used to go there all the time for work pants because they had the «short» pants actually available in stores, but I eventually gave up because every
style I liked never had them in my height.
I like that you're
planning on
using your
style profile to better your life in other ways too.
I started to apply the same capsule wardrobe logic that I
use to
plan the GYPO
Style Challenge but on a much smaller scale.
She wanted to show couples that you can
use your personal experiences to help
plan and
style your wedding and make it a beautifully unique occasion.
Of course you can
use a monochrome
styling trick on any shade but to me greys always work together without ever feeling too matchy or
planned.
To be honest - I don't follow any specific
plan, I
use a combo of three
styles...
I'm seeing these bags being
used as a belt to cinch oversized shirts and give them more shape, so I'm
planning to
style one a bit high waisted; more European kind of vibes.
These claim to offer pre-vis segments
used to
plan for those scenes, though they're really just gags, as they show the scenes ala the
style of 1980s video games.
Screenwriters Michael Robert Johnson, Anthony Peckham, and Simon Kinberg whittle the Holmes character down to the basics, reasonably expand him
using some of Doyle's background information to give him a slight action hero edge, develop a pretty crackerjack story involving the occult and a
plan to recreate the Gunpowder Plot
using a Victorian -
style chemical weapon, and read between the lines of the Holmes / Watson dynamic enough to make us read further between the lines.
The Payday -
style game,
planned for 2016, is a co-op shooter that will
use both new and current characters and storylines from within the Walking Dead universe.
This contains a table with examples for businesses that grow
using different methods an EasyJet Case Study with Exam
Style questions, and an essay
plan for a Sainsbury's and Argos Growth.