Sentences with phrase «plot inconsistencies»

One of my strengths is finding plot inconsistencies and working out character timelines in addition to performing the grammar, proofreading and line editing functions.

I will provide you with an editorial letter afterward addressing issues such as plot inconsistencies, achieving a compelling climax, and characterization.

If you step back from their major plot inconsistencies one will see both games have so many other things in common including the same premise and overall journey to find out the truth.

There are a few plot inconsistencies, but this near - silent drama (which surprisingly enough doesn't shy away from some light comedy) is still effective, thanks in part to Lee Seung - yeon's fierce performance.

by Walter Chaw As stupid as stupid can be, Lawrence Kasdan's splashy comeback on the backs of two writers who haven't really been any good for about forty years between them (Stephen King and William Goldman) is riddled with knee - slapping plot inconsistencies and the sort of dunderheaded conveniences that reek equally of desperation and a lack of respect for the audience.

The decision to cast Smith also brings about some strange plot inconsistencies.

If this is a developmental edit for a fictional manuscript, the main goal should be to identify plot inconsistencies and holes (unexplained parts), character appearance inconsistencies, the characters» arcs (do they change?

Despite the campy writing and plot inconsistencies, I still found quite a bit to enjoy about Winter's War.

There are some plot inconsistencies that appear just for the sake of convenience (the group live a DIY, freegan lifestyle in a crumbling house, but later reveal they have state - of - the - art satellite technology in their basement that rivals the Bat Cave), but overall Marling and Batmanglij seem wary of getting too conventional.

The film itself, marred by some plot inconsistencies, is an effective thriller with ever escalating suspense.

As for the time traveling device given to Hermione in book 3 - the plot inconsistencies that that opens up are endless - not least, if she, a 13 year old, has her hands on such a device, how come the Ministry of Magic aren't using similar devices to leap back and forth in time to observe what actually happened at key events, even if they're not allowed to change them.

I have never done an edit where I have failed to find typos, grammatical errors, plot inconsistencies, and narrative glitches, no matter how accomplished the writer, how many times they have been published, or how much success they have garnered.

-- Offer constructive criticism regarding character / story arcs, dialogue, pacing, and plot inconsistencies.

It also requires holding the reader's attention by ensuring that the content is free of DIY red flags like unconventional layout; micro editorial problems such as spelling, punctuation and grammar errors and inconsistencies; and macro editorial problems such as confusing point of view and plot inconsistency.

Most indies swap for content edits (plot inconsistencies, characterization, etc.) and we also get our fans to read our work pre-edit.

This isn't yet another murky blog that defiantly stamps its foot over the «problems» in traditional publishing, and the sheer audacity of publishing companies to expect an author to help with marketing, all of which usually acts as a thin veil that covers what is, at best, an uninspired book and at worst a flimsy manuscript littered with bad formatting, typos, grammatical errors and plot inconsistencies.