Sentences with phrase «poor character development»

I criticized the second and fourth movies for having poor character development compared to the first movie.

From poor character development to cliche - ridden dialogue — those representing the legal system perhaps bearing the brunt (Naomie Harris is simply wasted)-- the film won't do much, if anything at all, for those with concerns of it being «just another boxing movie.»

It's poorly written with a terrible plot and poor character development.

I personally could overlook the previously - assumed dead Letty's reappearance and amnesia as well as a tank flying around a highway, but the sheer spectacle of the visuals do not compensate for the unimaginative plot and poor character development.

I wouldn't say it's the worst movie I've ever seen, but its mismanagement of disparate genres, its poor character development and its insufferable characters make this a difficult movie to recommend.

Final Verdict: Poor character development, an uneven script, but at the end of the day, this is more fun than I expected.

Barring some poor character development and a few jarring tonal shifts that undercut the drama, the film is a lot of fun and hilarious to boot.

As with other Bruckheimer endeavors, a bunch of lame - ass 20 - something male actors fill up the supporting cast in an effort for the female audience members to argue over who's the cutest to keep their minds occupied from the ridiculous plot and poor character development.

But with sensory impact diminished, you're simply more aware of corny dialogue, poor character development, bizarre dream sequences, and Snyder and company's stunning inability to mine interest and excitement from these large, storied personalities.

Unfortunately, the poor characters development, silly script, and horrendous dialogue crushes all of these hopes in a hurry, as the more you see the phony looking CGI and puppet snakes, the more ridiculous it all seems to be.

Clichés in «Safe House»: skilled C.I.A. agent gone rogue, naïve rookie agent with superb talents, bureaucratic director, gruff and mysterious senior officer, unnecessary blonde girlfriend, shaky camera, fight sequences with quick cuts, an obligatory car chase, poor character development, a double cross, a triple cross, an action - thriller without thrills, boredom.

As in any sub-genre, the move to capitalize on the «disaster film» trend has led to many sub-par disaster films, with weak and unsubtle, formulaic plots, improbable circumstances and bad science, poor character development, and laughable acting from third - rate stars portraying cliched characters.

Its messy timeline, poor character development, and uninspiring acting makes for a pretty meh experience.

Sure, he loses two fingers in an early altercation with the creation, rendering him mentally cuckolded, yet even the most furious rage of Shannon's performance can not distract from the poor character development.

When more substantive editing is required, I work one - on - one with the author to address weaknesses in story structure, inconsistent pacing, poor character development, and contrivances.

Self - publishing authors should seek out a professional editor to vet your manuscript and point out inconsistencies, overwriting, poor character development and the merits of the work.