Sentences with phrase «readers out of the story»

They take readers out of the story you're trying to create.

Some might think formatting isn't that important, but at the end of the day, we want to keep readers immersed in our story, and we don't want all our hard work on story craft to be undermined when a formatting glitch pulls readers out of the story.

The plot may be stellar, but the writing mistakes jar readers out of the story.

Over at the Kill Zone, James Scott Bell calls out writing flubs that throw readers out of stories, Mythcreant writer Oren Ashkenazi offers tips on creating immersive fantasy settings, and Susan Perabo expounds a method for developing characters with background and experiences entirely different from your own.

Many readers today will not be offended by a certain amount of profanity in books, but shocking words often pull readers out of the story.

The writer is using a word that distracts and can pull the reader out of the story.

Don't format your work in such a way that it throws your reader out of the story.

It is a line by line examination of your book to find those nasty typos and grammatical errors that make your book look unprofessional and takes readers out of your story.

As a team we're just beginning to grapple with ideas on how to signify reader choice without overly disturbing rhythms of reading or dropping the reader out of the story world.

Just like a typo or grammatical error is distracting, a design error pulls the reader out of the story.

Not exact matches

The new service would ask readers to subscribe to the news platform after they read 10 or more articles in a month — or else they would be locked out of viewing additional stories for the remainder of the month.

So Mic is rolling out reader - response surveys on some of its stories, which give users a sliding scale of worthiness they can choose from to express whether a post was deemed time - worthy or not.

I have found that readers love statistics, counterintuitive results, and real - life stories, so I try hard to ensure that I get at least two out of three of these items in all of my content, whether it's a book, a magazine article, or an online column or blog post.

If you want to stick in your readers» minds, your content needs to stand out — and one of the best ways to do this is to tell a story.

One of the most well - established ways to hear from readers, the NYT public editor pointed out — although not the only one, by any means — is through comments on news stories.

With a clear four - step methodology to help readers move from idea to action, templates for readers to map out their problems and the opposing ideas for solving them, and with practical and memorable stories, from music mogul Jay - Z, to the founder of Vanguard Group, Creating Great Choices was written with MBA students, business managers, non-profit and government agency leaders, teachers, and even elementary school students in mind.

Through relatable stories, practical ideas, and careful application of God's Word, Generous Love equips readers to break free from the shackles of self - absorption and discover how much sweeter life can be when we reach out to bless others with the unconditional love of Christ.

The women simply fade out of the story leaving the readers to hear for themselves the words of the unknown interpreter, «He is risen.»

Lewis» Space Trilogy, consisting of the books Out of the Silent Planet, Perelandra and That Hideous Strength is a very good allagory on Christianity from a more «adult» viewpoint, without the obvious appeal to the young reader, even though they read like science fiction stories.

Imperceptible though these hints may appear, the reader should remember them when he gets to the end of the story and recognize that the historian sees a purpose being worked out in the history he relates.

I'm so glad to have all of you other great bloggers and readers out there to share recipes and stories with.

Many of my readers have reached out to me with stories of their own gastrointestinal upset and have asked for advice.

Welcome to Effed It Up, a semi-regular column where you, the Basically reader, write us with stories of your...less - than - proud kitchen moments, and we try to figure out how to, you know, not do that again.

I would love to feature your gluten free chocolate chip recipe in my first article (coming out on Tuesday the 20th of December), as well as some of your story because I feel it would really connect with our readers.

This is a capital lie even though they are entitle to their opnion but is left for the reader to take the senses out of nonsense opinion or story they made.

But as a blogger who is privileged to hear the personal stories of many readers, I also know that lots of well - intentioned women find out in the hospital that they can't breastfeed for a variety of reasons, or they feel (or are advised) that formula supplementation is needed.

So for all my future mommas, and readers out there here is my personal story of postpartum depression.

Readers, Twitter followers, and birth story junkies have reached out to me over the years which prompted me to post the stories of each of my very different births.

For many BWF readers, getting their complete stories out of their minds and onto paper (or a screen) has helped them to understand, organize, and gain perspective on the things that happened to them.

Big media outlets are definitely realizing the value of comments, and community - building is a major reason that the Washington Post and other major media sites have rolled out comment features for most or all of news stories, and some have even implemented social network - style features for readers.

Alabi, who is also eyeing an elective position in Oyo State wrote on his Twitter handle «With the news just coming out about Linda Ikeji's engagement, instead of blogs going out to investigate and write stories about them for their readers, all of them are just recycling «Linder Ikeji is engaged to her ex, Big Sam».

DiChristina: Yeah, I mean I think one of the things we don't realize working on the insides of Scientific American all the time is that the editor is not just working with the scientists but also they're reporting and going out to meetings and doing other things; they're [scouring] the world for the best science that matters for readers, have a lot of expertise themselves and it just seemed to me that this would be the kind of thing that readers might really find fascinating — what the editors of Scientific American [are] thinking based on all their conversations with the experts of the day covering the various areas of science and technology and how it affects our lives; and this was the genesis of this story.

Since I've tolerated enough «steady state cardio is dead» and «aerobics doesn't work» nonsense for the better part of the last decade, despite the transformation success stories I keep churning out that clearly show otherwise, (not to mention my own bodybuilding success, which includes regular cardio), I thought I should not only answer my reader, but also make this the topic for today's blog to share with all of our readers.

Through his blog, he shares his personal story and encourages his readers to make the most out of every second, minute, hour, and day.

Like you'll be out to lunch with your friends but you're not actually there because you're so focused on taking the perfect Insta Story to share with readers that you miss out on half of the conversation!

Telling just part of the story compels the reader to find out more.

Through his blog, he shares his personal story and encourages his readers to make the most out of every second, minute, hour, and day.

The series of children's stories that grew out of their family and home in Ashdown Forest brought happiness to a world of readers and wealth to their author but mixed blessings to the Milnes.

TRUE BELIEVERS are the perfect way for readers interested in Deadpool to try out some of his most iconic stories in recent memory.

«If anything,» she muses, «the long metacognitive detour had probably pulled these readers out of «the virtual dream» of the story, and broken the spell of the enchantment.»

Readers of the city's dailies were treated to a host of stories about out - of - control students caught brandishing weapons, a teacher and a student being taken away on stretchers after a fight at a school in the Bronx, and students at several schools assaulting school safety officers.

The headline, graphics, and the opening of the story — all that most readers will register, unfortunately — focus narrowly on charter school networks» struggles to help figure out how to get more of their graduates to complete college:

He helps authors from around the world get their stories out of their heads, onto the page, and into readers hands.

It's a rags - to - riches sort of story that's mostly re-told to encourage new writers to try out self - publishing for its ease and accessibility to readers.

According to a New York Times story that came out over the weekend, the writers are finding their earnings severely cut due to Amazon's recent introduction of a service called Kindle Unlimited, which allows readers access to a wide variety of e-books, and as many as they want, for a $ 9.99 monthly fee.

Once you've gone through many drafts of your story, you'll need an editor — someone who'll be able to adjust your writing to a way that makes sense to the reader, as well as ironing out any grammatical mistakes along the way.

A leading children's poet, Lewis uses an unusual rhyme scheme that links the stanzas and holds young readers in its grip with this story of three children out to explore a deserted house one dark night.

If the entire story was told in third person, from Aaron's point of view, the reader would have missed out on valuable information and nuisances.

This story of a young mother resonated with BookBrowse readers with 11 out of 14 reviewers giving it a full five stars.

With an obvious debt to Willy Lowman, the traveling salesman / father icon of Arthur Miller's Death of a Salesman, Daniel Wallace takes the story a bit further, allowing his protagonist to act out and attempt to act through the exaggerated yet serious dynamics of this father / son relationship while inviting the reader to symbolically do the same.