Schubert Ogden, Donald Evans, and Paul van Buren have written to me after
reading earlier drafts of the chapters on their positions, and I have been helped by their criticisms.
James Ivory should be bowing down to Luca every day for putting that script into shape (have
you read the early drafts?).
This might be someone who
read the earlier draft, or it could be someone who's coming fresh to your novel.
So who's going to
read your early drafts and help with your final polish?
Thanks to Malcolm Mercer and Alice Woolley for
reading an earlier draft of this commentary and providing helpful comments.
I would also like to thank our colleagues who generously took time out of their schedules to
read earlier drafts of this Article: Hether C. Macfarlane, Instructor, Global Lawyering Skills, University of the Pacific McGeorge School of Law; Kathryn M. Stanchi, Associate Professor of Law, Temple University Beasley School of Law; and Kerri L. Stone, Assistant Professor, Florida International University College of Law.
Although the book was conceived as an introduction to the future for tomorrow's lawyers, when I asked various clients and colleagues to
read early drafts, many said that it is also a useful primer for more - seasoned practitioners.
«Georgia [Whitney] was the first person to
read an early draft of a book I am authoring and provided excellent suggestions that I have integrated into subsequent drafts.
Not exact matches
Note: Several friends who gave input on
earlier drafts of this piece deserve tremendous credit for helping shape what you've just
read; any hurtful or insensitive words are entirely my own responsibility.
We brought her on so
early that she was
reading drafts and able to really get to know this character long before we lensed up.
The trailer did feel like recycled ideas from discarded «Cloverfield» and «Transfomers» sequels, but the
early draft of the script we
read was a cracker, and if anyone was going to water it down, it was unlikely to be del Toro.
I had
read a very
early draft of this script, even before there was a filmmaker attached to it.
Goldwyn first
read Pamela Gray's script five years
earlier and shepherded it through multiple
drafts until Dustin Hoffman came on board as a producer and got the project financed.
After publication, the Code and
Draft Regulations have been sent to the Children and Families Bill Committee for consideration during the second
reading debate, with full consultation expected to begin in the latter part of this year and regulations for the Code laid out in
early 2014.
Critics on the left have taken issue with a number of things surrounding the standards (you can
read a post about eight problems with the Core here), saying that there was not enough input from educators into the
drafting of the Core, that the standards are not based on any research, that they ignore what is known about
early childhood development and much more.
But then I'll begin part one of my the never - ending game: waiting for beta readers to
read and comment on my
early draft.
You're
earliest drafts are... gasp... written in actual ink (or lead) and is scribbled chicken scratch no one can
read but you.
I
read this as an
early draft, so it was great to
read it again in polished form.
I
read this as an
early draft, so it was wonderful to
read it again in polished form.
I
read them in
early draft form, so it's fun to revisit them now after they have evolved into final form.
For those of you who have
read my
earlier posts, you know that I wrote the first
draft of Maids of Misfortune 20 years before I actually published it.
Burry spent the end of 2004 and
early 2005 scanning hundreds and actually
reading dozens of the prospectuses, certain he was the only one apart from the lawyers who
drafted them to do so — even though you could get them all for $ 100 a year from 10kWizard.com.
From my initial
readings, it is a superior document than the
draft of the Unified Synthesis Product released for comment by the USCCSP
earlier this summer (for which the public comments were sufficient to have the CCSP rethink the contents and release date of the final document), but, it is still in need of some modification and, most importantly, its support of an endangerment finding is still in question.
I've been
reading the Agee et al manuscript again, and it strikes me as an
early draft, so I wouldn't take it too seriously.
Will you be releasing an
early draft, so that investigators can avoid
reading the details before they exclaim that how you justify your conclusions is beyond them?
In
earlier drafts, it
read «We the people of the states of...» -LRB-
After
reading an
earlier version of this post, my colleague Sarah Sutherland wrote «My only criticism of your Slaw column is that I think you miss acknowledging the simple things — applying rules to straightforward issues, automated compilation of
draft documents, etc. that AI will make a big difference on.
I must have
read too many Judge Posner opinions before starting my judicial clerkship for a judge serving on the U.S. Court of Appeals for the Third Circuit, because
early on I added into a
draft opinion a passage that would have ordered an attorney to show cause for violating an important rule.