In editing the
dialogue for publication I have changed
spoken English into written English, including the normal things (like: excising partial sentences, false starts, irrelevant asides, and things that needlessly impede the flow of reading the
dialogue; filling in nouns for indefinite pronoun references;
removing some colloquial language and contractions; and adjusting the grammar).
McClure traces scene after scene of
spoken dialogue,
removing pigment from the paper with each transcription, ultimately condensing the entire text from the full season so that it can be viewed at once, impossible to decipher.