It's extremely important to include
something in that first paragraph to capture the reader's attention.
Not exact matches
The breastfeeding fact must not be one listed above
in the
first paragraph, but
something else that is interesting and not so well known.
The Wolf of Wall Street (2013) I mentioned
in one of the
first paragraphs that brazenness was
something I needed
in a comedy and this movie is the very definition of brazen.
One day, you're going to see
something in the pages of your
first draft that looks half - way decent, maybe even looks like a gem or a gold nugget of a sentence or
paragraph or page that gives you a springboard to a decent scene, or a great chapter, and when that happens you'll feel you've come out of your funk.
If you would like the
first paragraph in each chapter to look differently, apply your changes at the
first paragraph and save your settings as a new style,
something like «firstpar».
Tying
in with your
first paragraph, I'll frequently try to determine which way is the «wrong way» to go a game, especially
in a dungeon or
something like that, so that I don't miss anything.
That is
something that needs to be mentioned
in the
first few
paragraphs.
:) Seriously, when posting
something like this please paste
in the
first paragraph or two and a link (not a copyright problem, BTW), or at least some kind of summary, and maybe
something about the authors if you think they're especially worth listening to; otherwise, I think it's pretty certain that nobody's going to follow up, however useful the article may be.
Maybe
something along the lines of the
first question
in the last
paragraph?
Did you mean to link to
something in CGS at the end of your
first paragraph?
The connection to the movie is
in something mentioned
in the
first paragraph of Ms. Wolf's article.
Further, to elaborate these points, the
first paragraph of developer cover letters should be
something similar to this: With extensive work experience as a business development manager
in selling industrial and residential projects to a greater number of clients, I am writing this letter to associate myself with your prestigious organization.