So while I bid my fellow writers a fond adieu, don't let my personal
story detract from the critical importance of what Corina and Carla discuss in their invaluable article on editing.
Not exact matches
The creation
story is, because it is nothing but magical thinking that
detracts from empirical reality.
I even got questioned for
detracting from the thread, though my intent was to offer my personal struggle with what the thread eventually evolved into, while feeling for genuinely for Julie (based upon her willingness to divulge to a public blog her side of the
story), and while questioning all along what really happened given others» pov on all this.
The short version is: I don't think the Exodus did happen in historical time, but that doesn't at all
detract from its powerful spiritual truth, or
from the ways we've constituted our community through telling this
story in the first person plural, and through embracing the teaching that the Exodus didn't just happen then but unfolds even now.
The conclusion, then, that one of these narratives is legend is by no means intended to
detract from the value of the narrative; it only means that the one who pronounces it has perceived somewhat of the poetic beauty of the narrative and thinks that he has thus arrived at an understanding of the
story.
Other reports have nitpicked details of the
story, most of which are addressed in the book and none of which
detract from her mother's telling of the life and death of Cassie Bernall.
As much as possible, do not correct your child's mistakes unless they
detract from the meaning of the
story.
I've heard so many
stories of women who couldn't or even didn't want to breastfeed and were subsequently racked by guilt about it, and I think that just
detracts from the joy of raising a baby.
This is all about
detracting from that
story and I'm afraid I think it's a smear tactic that won't work.
Still, a flurry of negative news
stories could not
detract from Mr. Heastie's momentum.
You are manufacturing a
story where one might not exist and thereby
detracting from your credibility.
It helped me stand in front of a room full of college kids and tell my
story, knowing that how I look isn't
detracting from what I'm trying to say.»
What's more, you may feel that testosterone levels can't be responsible for the whole
story - the biological reductionism that pervades this line of reasoning
detracts from the fact that many men may cheat due to psychosocial and emotional pressures, while also ignoring the fact that many men do in fact believe in monogamy.
Though director Ben Affleck takes a true
story and perhaps muddies the details a bit, it doesn't
detract from the fact that he has made a terrific and timely thriller based on a classified event that was buried for decades.
It is not a matter of further advancement of the moving image so much as being further enough so as to not
detract from the intended experience, i.e. good enough to let the
story be told.
The camera is both overactive and acknowledged in the film, a choice made by Penn that actually
detracts from the
story that he is trying to tell by distracting us
from the players telling it.
I'm glad that the movie did not mewl all over Kerrigan as it would have
detracted from the
story.
This meant chopping out huge chunks of Rowling's tome - sized novel, and rather than
detracting from the
story, it enabled a more concise and enjoyable film to be made.
I think that the way the movie was cut reinforced the themes of the movie but it also
detracted from each individual
story as much as it emphasized the overall
story.
The key difficulty that has to be overcome with «Azkaban,» however, is that there is too much standard Harry Potter stuff the film seems compelled to include, material that both swells the running time to that counterproductive two hours and 21 minutes and
detracts from the
story's intrinsic drama.
Eventually, doing these tasks become a bit repetitive, but thankfully the
story remains engaging enough throughout that it doesn't
detract from the overall experience too much.
The complexity of the historical conspiracy first conceived
detracted from the characters and their reality, I felt, and those characters are ultimately what have to shape the world and
story.
Gillespie has imbued his film with black humour, while never undermining the authenticity of the characters or
detracting from the abuse that runs through the
story.
It
detracts from the weight of the subject matter, reading more like neglectful treatment of Page's life
story.
Fortunately, the power of the
story is such that these minor flaws do not
detract from its emotional impact.
Cage's matter - of - fact, lackadaisical voice over certainly does little to draw us in to his peculiar world philosophy, and colorful villains and wacky side characters also
detract from the feeling of authenticity in the
story.
The further the film progresses, the more the obviousness looms large over the
story,
detracting from the otherwise elegant characterisation and intelligent presentation.
Macbeth's dramatic action is also unusually streamlined, with no romantic subplots or lesser court intrigues to
detract from the central
story.
Telling the plot of the
story as if the audience can't figure it out visually is insulting and
detracts from the scene.
And how he is determined not to let his worthy film be defined by that case, lest it
detract from his mission to use Turner's
story as a catalyst for discussion on the turbulence between blacks and whites that has roiled major cities across the country this year.
Usually, due to the skill and dedication of the developers, that approach didn't
detract from the quality of their games — just look at Red Dead Redemption and the previous GTA titles — however after GTA Online became favored over
story mode, largely due to the huge amount revenue being brought in by microtransactions, fans are concerned.
Bradley Cooper also appears in a fun cameo as a notorious arms dealer who does business with the two guys, though it's one of those cases where having an A-list actor suddenly pop up in your movie
detracts from the
story.
This doesn't
detract from that other - worldly quality that are his trademark; it means that their
story is more easy to relate to.
Ultimately, the children are doubly absent, both
from the characters in the
story and the
story's deepest concerns, and this
detracts from our ability to invest deeply in the film.
A couple of holes in the plot did not
detract from the great acting and interesting
story told here.
Casting choices aren't just problematic, they
detract severely
from the film - and not just because it is full of American, European and Australian actors playing as Middle Eastern, all adopting a variety of accents that aren't of their native region, neither in the
story nor in real - life.
There might be a few flaws that
detract from the gameplay,
stories, controls, presentations, or value, but the game is still an enjoyable experience that justifies a full playthrough.
Too many kooky supporting characters are given the spotlight for reasons unknown, and while they might be funny at times, the constant asides do
detract from the dramatic momentum of the emotional
story at its core.
«Being able to translate that to images, to handle that responsibly to make sure that both aspects of the
story came across and it was a movie that felt real — it was a movie that felt colorful, as Oakland does — but that it also didn't feel like the lighter elements were subtracting or
detracting from the stronger thematic ideas that Daveed and Rafa wanted to get across.»
The efforts to add gravitas and depth to Brother Bear's
story do
detract from it a bit, and make the film's ending disappointingly witless.
However, it doesn't
detract overall
from Lewis's obvious passion for delightful turns of phrase (as in the «thin, wintery smile» of Station Warrant Officer Meade, who is the disciplinarian of RAF Honington), his respectful attention to detail, and his love of this remarkable true
story.
Multiple narrators would have
detracted from the
story.
I think chapters of switched narrators would have
detracted from this
story, and that literary device simply was not needed.
Rest assured, these characters play very small parts and in no way
detract from the historical aspects of the
story.
Hammon «broke» both rules in Five Days in May, yet in such a way that it didn't
detract from the
story.
There are the kinds of digressions and repetition that one would expect
from a master storyteller, the asides adding to the
story's interest rather than
detracting from it.
The device of using a child's narration to describe something he can not understand, but that is perfectly clear to the adult readers, is a clever one, but some glaring inconsistencies make this
story less credible than it could have been, and perhaps
detract from its strength.
Yes, it was interesting stuff, but an info dump is still an info dump and it
detracted from the flow of the
story.
Some of the character names made it slightly confusing at times, but didn't
detract from the pure fun of the
story.
I did not want the details of his
story to
detract from its heart.