Then I do a full page - by - page line edit, which may include surgical and wholesale deletions, shifts and restructuring within sentences, paragraphs, scenes, chapters,
suggested new language for transitions, dialogue, visual and sensory description, and other polish as needed.
Were I his editor, I would have made some surgical cuts and
suggested new language to clarify the sequence of events.
I hope you'll explain what developmental editors do, as well — how they often start with an author before a word is written, how they support, challenge, and sometimes suggest characters, stories ideas, structure; and how they also line - edit and even
suggest new language for character development, dialogue, and other aspects of the literary style.
Not exact matches
The
New York Times recently highlighted the long - term impact difficult schedules can have on family wellness, in an article called: «A growing body of research
suggests that a child's
language and problem - solving skills may suffer as a result of their parents» problematic schedules, and that they may be more likely than other children to smoke and drink when they're older.»
The reason for this
suggested change of
language is that wholes are established at transition, and creative process (as in 2b) uses the togetherness of the many prehensions (that give birth to the
new whole at transition) to make a
new specification.
But on occasion he uses much stronger
language: the property he is describing «requires a divine foundation» (emphasis added); it «provides
new strength for the arguments that point to a Creator»; it «clearly
suggests the existence of a divine source of power and perfection.»
What Bultmann means is that the difference between the mythological
language of the
New Testament and ecclesiastical dogma on the one hand and his own interpretation on the other is that the former presents us with a «miraculous, supernatural event», whereas the right interpretation is one which
suggests «an historical event wrought out in time and space».
As queer theorist Hanne Blank recounts, «This
new concept [of heterosexuality], gussied up in a mangled mix of impressive - sounding dead
languages, gave old orthodoxies a
new and vibrant lease on life by
suggesting, in authoritative tones, that science had effectively pronounced them natural, inevitable, and innate.»
Wenger is yet to commit to a
new deal and has said he will wait to the end of the season before making a decision, however his
language may
suggest that he's already given his future a fair bit of thought.
However, a
new study published recently in Science
suggests that this capacity to reason logically may not just depend on
language, at least not entirely.
Laziridis says
New Democracy is committed to bringing the deficit down and to «much of the structural change
suggested by the troika» but calls some of the proposals «ill - advised» and warns in colourful
language that: «if Greece explodes, it will be 100 % blame on those who do not let a country breathe before they operate.»
«As a city where more than 300
languages are spoken, London has a proud history of tolerance and diversity and to
suggest there are areas where police officers can not go because of radicalisation is simply ridiculous... Crime has been falling steadily both in London and in
New York - the only reason I wouldn't go to some parts of
New York is the real risk of meeting Donald Trump»
Results from a series of studies involving thousands of participants from birth to age 90
suggest that the brain's ability to process sound is influenced by everything from playing music and learning a
new language to aging,
language disorders and hearing loss.
The
new study
suggests that the way children learn a
language may play a critical role in constructing these linguistic rules.
An as yet undeciphered script found on relics from the Indus valley constitutes a genuine written
language, a
new mathematical analysis
suggests.
Music training, begun as late as high school, may help improve the teenage brain's responses to sound and sharpen hearing and
language skills,
suggests a
new Northwestern University study.
But the results of a
new study, described in the early online edition of the Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences, challenge this so - called critical period hypothesis,
suggesting that people can in fact process a second
language in much the same way as they process their first.
Overall, Bergen
suggests that our use of profanity may provide
new insights into how our brain works, how we process
language and how we communicate with others.
Unlike with hearing spoken
languages, listeners who understand this rare form of communication rely on both sides of their brains, a
new study
suggests.
Scientists do not yet understand that
language, but experiments
suggest that it is part of the neurological conversation that takes place as we learn and form
new memories.
A wealth of
new studies, she said,
suggest that children learn
language from listening to others but are not as well - equipped as adults to cope with the cacophony of modern life.
But
new UC Berkeley research
suggests that Siri and other digital helpers could someday learn the algorithms that humans have used for centuries to create and understand metaphorical
language.
New research
suggests herders north of the Black Sea were early speakers of Proto - Indo - European, the ancient tongue that gave rise to hundreds of
languages, including English
Such is the scenario
suggested by a
new study, which finds a potential biological indicator of how well preschool children perceive rhythm, an ability linked to
language development.
A
new study published today in Science, though,
suggests our capacity to reason logically may not actually depend on
language, at least not fully.
The
new linguistic research methods, which use «big data» to compare similarities and differences between
languages,
suggest that such a population would have been linguistically diverse.
The
new linguistic research methods, which use «big data» to compare similarities and differences between
languages,
suggest that such a population would have been linguistically diverse, Sicoli said.
Now, a
new study of body cam footage from Oakland, California,
suggests that officers of all races consistently use less respectful
language with blacks than with whites during traffic stops.
New research
suggests people modify
language in this way because it makes things simpler for our minds — as speakers, listeners, and readers.
But
new research from Washington University in St. Louis
suggests that children as young as 3 already are beginning to recognize and follow important rules and patterns governing how letters in the English
language fit together to make words.
A
new study uses ancient DNA to
suggest that a massive migration of herders from the east shaped the genomes of most living Europeans — and that these immigrants may have been the source of Proto - Indo - European (PIE), the mysterious ancestral tongue from which the more than 400 Indo - European
languages sprang.
New research
suggests that advances in the production of Early Stone Age tools had less to do with the evolution of
language and more to do with the brain networks involved in modern piano playing.
A
new study published in the current issue of Biological Psychiatry, by researchers at Cardiff University School of Medicine and the University of Bristol,
suggests that there is a spectrum of attention, hyperactivity / impulsiveness and
language function in society, with varying degrees of these impairments associated with clusters of genes linked with the risk for ADHD.
New research
suggests that children who speak more than one
language are better at communicating and understanding others» needs.
(Suzy's glance - to - camera in the final shot — a shot with a completely different grammar and
language than the rest of the film —
suggests that our characters are headed for a very different world in the months and years to come; it also
suggests Anderson might be looking for
new worlds to conquer.)
The data we have also
suggest that, at the time they applied, 4.2 percent of charter school applicants were classified as English
language learners, while 13.6 percent of
New York City's students were classified as such.
New language and
suggested books to include are listed.
Sturgeon said: «Encouraging children to read for pleasure not only helps our young people develop vital
language and literacy skills, but also opens up a whole
new world of adventure and fun through the exciting and varied range of books
suggested.
A
new study
suggests that grammar and
language skills are learnt, as well as being strongly associated with pattern recognition.
It can be hard for academically advanced English -
language learners to show what they can do before they have mastered the
language, and
new evidence
suggests they are underrepresented in gifted programs in nearly every state.
Assessing the Common Core Standards: Opportunities for Improving Measures of Instruction Educational Researcher, May 2011 Responding to comments on their «Common Core Standards: The
New U.S. Intended Curriculum,» the authors
suggest additional perspective that should be considered when addressing quality and change, stating additional conceptualizations of mathematics and English
language arts content as well as how to define and measure alignment among content standards, materials, assessments, and instruction should be explored.
The
language of the
new resolution that the Hartford Board intends to vote on also appears to try and appease parents at SAND elementary by
suggesting that rather than target SAND from the outset, Kishimoto must go through a review process of up to three schools, and include the local school governance councils, before picking a school for some sort of takeover / makeover.
Will the party show commitment to rein in the «Wild West» of charter schools, as
new platform
language suggests?
Using the principles we offer above, we
suggest that English
language arts methods classes can infuse technology in a way that does not interfere with the content pedagogy but supports it in a way that actively involves students and prepares them with the technical and pedagogical skills for creating the
new learning - centered classroom.
We have also
suggested having our
new languages units in the first half term.
ASCD» scial comments (PDF) on the competition's proposed priorities and criteria raised concerns related to an overemphasis on college readiness; the
new application
language better incorporates a focus on career readiness, requiring applicants to
suggest at least one performance measure to assess whether students are on track to being career - ready.
This research has practical implications,
suggesting that practitioners (e.g., teachers, speech and
language therapists) should emphasise orthographic forms when teaching children
new words.
While the
new STS's not unhandsome lines make reference to Cadillac's distinctive creased - angle and vertical - headlamps design
language from top to bottom, a close look inside
suggests the car is the creation of design and engineering teams that spent more than a few afternoons hanging around the last 5 - series BMW, probing, analyzing, and costing it down to the last micron, atomic subparticle, and cent.
Between now and 2015, Hyundai will introduce
new «fluidic precision» styling, which will be toned down compared to the current «fluidic sculpture» design
language, a report for Automotive News
suggests.
My Aura firmware is 2.8.1 and I've tried the settings you've
suggested but nothing changed, the bloody title is still there, my Calibre
language is set on italian but I don't think that is the issue, is it maybe because of the
new firmware?