Sentences with phrase «through awkward phrasing»

I've presented workshops and written several articles (here's a good one) on tips for approaching the whole editing and revising process, starting with macro issues like logistics, characterisation, plot, and pacing, and working your way through awkward phrasing and wordiness down to micro errors like spelling and punctuation.

Not exact matches

For the modern highly educated person who believes «that truth is glimpsed momentarily and in fragments, that it lacks symmetry, that it is awkward and angular as it breaks through to us,» he suggests, the very phrasing of religious discourse in consistent, propositional statements will sound unreal (p. 42).