A + = Potential Masterpiece A = Most Excellent A - = Excellent B + =
Very, Very Good B = Very Good B - = Good C + = Really Solid C = Solid C - = Flawed D + = Not very good, serious flaws D = Tremendously not good, glaring problems D - = Utter Disaster F = Useless T
Very,
Very Good B = Very Good B - = Good C + = Really Solid C = Solid C - = Flawed D + = Not very good, serious flaws D = Tremendously not good, glaring problems D - = Utter Disaster F = Useless T
Very Good B =
Very Good B - = Good C + = Really Solid C = Solid C - = Flawed D + = Not very good, serious flaws D = Tremendously not good, glaring problems D - = Utter Disaster F = Useless T
Very Good B - = Good C + = Really Solid C = Solid C - = Flawed D + = Not
very good, serious flaws D = Tremendously not good, glaring problems D - = Utter Disaster F = Useless T
very good, serious flaws D = Tremendously not good,
glaring problems D - = Utter Disaster F = Useless Trash
Consider
very carefully the message of this disturbing little trinket and the more
glaring technical
problems of the piece (from the animation to the lack of any real voice talent — April Winchell in place of Rosie O'Donnell is a particularly surprising drop - off given the excrescence of O'Donnell) pale in comparison.
I find that there are so many things an author can do wrong in querying an agent with a submission letter, while there are
very few things an author can do right in querying an agent with a submission letter, so it's really hard to say every single thing an author should avoid in a query letter... Though if I could throw just five
glaring problems I tend to see:
A
very enjoyable RPG let down by a few
glaring flaws and some technical
problems as well, but for any RPG fan this is certainly worth a look as it offers a great skill tree, interesting world and the ability to turn into a dragon which practically makes the entire game worth buying just for that reason.