He is also one of three faculty colleagues to whom I gave the first draft of my article for feedback. (firstthings.com)
The rules now go out for a 15 - day comment period, an early draft of this article mistakenly said the rules would not go out for public review. (cabinetreport.com)
When I worked for a print magazine, I'd often submit what I thought was a perfect final draft of an article — until I'd get a proof from our designer. (mashable.com)