But the movie's lack of narrative interest keeps it from being dramatically satisfying. (sfgate.com)
Tomorrowland has hanging about it, in other words, all the elements of disaster: winky meta references, lack of narrative cohesion, desperation - born mistakes, bad screenwriter / Nick - Riviera - bad script doctor Damon Lindelof as Bird's co-author... and yet it's good somehow. (filmfreakcentral.net)
With a considerably scattershot plot, one which has a somewhat episode design, Nerdland lacks some of the narrative momentum that comes from more cohesive stories. (waytooindie.com)