To be honest I liked the beginning and middle of the book rather than the end. (goodreads.com)
By big edit, I mean slicing the scenes that don't carry the story forward, adding layers of depth to your characters and figuring out a way to pave over the big plot holes even if it means reworking the entire middle of your book. (writerunboxed.com)
It's telling that in OFC's 150 - page networking directory, in which a page with a photo and biography is devoted to each manager, Olayan's entry falls in the middle of the book, per alphabetical order, on page 80. (fortune.com)