As you identify phrases that work, compile your own list and add to it as you come up with original phrases of your own, like Devon and Becca's «mulligan.» (gottman.com)
Update: Perhaps the saddest element of this case is that the hymn's original phrasing better represents the Presbyterian Church USA's historic beliefs than do objections raised by the committee members. (firstthings.com)
Throughout the revision the original phrase «triumph of good» has been softened to «growth of value.» (religion-online.org)