This is a great example of need to cut great material if it doesn't ultimately serve the primary purpose of the story. (flickeringmyth.com)
It's also funny to see Baxter try to interact with society, limited by the conventions of his character as written for purposes of the story he came from. (qwipster.net)
The Inciting Incident is what pushes your character to make some choice or embark on some journey that is the main purpose of your story. (howtowriteshop.loridevoti.com)