Legal size (about 16) is probably the largest I would ever consider and that would be more professionally and doing serious editing. (goodereader.com)
Learning how to properly rewrite and revise will be a boon for you as a writer, not only in getting an agent but further down the road, after possible book deals, getting serious edit letters from editors, being on deadline, etc.. (publishingcrawl.com)
There are elements here of a story to be told but the lack of character and plot development as well as serious editing are a hindrance to making it take off. (bookbrowse.com)