One of my strengths is finding plot inconsistencies and working out character timelines in addition to performing the grammar, proofreading and line editing functions. (aliceosborn.com)
I will provide you with an editorial letter afterward addressing issues such as plot inconsistencies, achieving a compelling climax, and characterization. (booklife.com)
If you step back from their major plot inconsistencies one will see both games have so many other things in common including the same premise and overall journey to find out the truth. (shshatteredmemories.com)